Ernesto Pacheco - WIP - Page 2

Neha · April 30th, 2007

The second image looks very well composited! I like the contrast of colors right now even though its in a conceptual stage. It will be interesting to see it develop. Great start...keep it coming!

CHE · April 30th, 2007

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Originally Posted by xrowdac

2nd image not so sure, I think I saw this angle and view from somebody earlier in this competition..

ciao..

First of all thank you for your comments; they are much appreciated. I have been playing around with it since Friday so rest assured that I didn't get the "idea" from another WIP. These are conceptual sketches. In any case, keep in mind that many of us will have similar camera views since we are sharing the same models. I don't think there's any avoiding that ...

Ernesto

xrowdac · May 1st, 2007

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Originally Posted by CHE

First of all thank you for your comments; they are much appreciated. I have been playing around with it since Friday so rest assured that I didn't get the "idea" from another WIP. These are conceptual sketches. In any case, keep in mind that many of us will have similar camera views since we are sharing the same models. I don't think there's any avoiding that ...

Ernesto

Hi Ernesto excuse me I did not meant to offend your or whatever It was a plain simple notion on my side.. I hope you didnt took it personally..

All the best to you and to the other competitors..

Just chill..

CHE · May 1st, 2007

No problem.

Here are a couple of views that I am exploring for the final composition. Let me know what you guys think.

xrowdac · May 1st, 2007

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Originally Posted by CHE

No problem.

Here are a couple of views that I am exploring for the final composition. Let me know what you guys think.

Looking really good.. I prefer the 2nd image it has more impact and angle as well..

all the best..
Gracias..

aaron-cds · May 1st, 2007

I think you should consider the second view with the railing in the foreground partially visible under a block of ice as if the viewer is standing on the ice. Right now, the second view looks like the viewer is floating in the air. My preference overall is for the portrait format.

Continuumx · May 1st, 2007

Hello Ernesto,

This image has a great feel and sense of dramatic intrigue. The conceptual nature is a fine work with an interesting POV and environment.

CHE · May 2nd, 2007

Thanks for your comments Tyrone.

Here is a quick sketch I did of a different approach I am contemplating at the moment. I will post a more finished conceptual rendering later on today.

Ernesto

Neha · May 2nd, 2007

Earnesto...the sketch is very beautiful and scenic. But I feel that in context of AVC the main structure is not in enough focus in this composition. There will be a lot going on with the valley and snow...maybe zoom into towards the building a bit...?

CHE · May 2nd, 2007

Thanks for your comments Neha. I feel the same way about this composition. However, I am not aware of any rule that says that we need use no less than 50% of our composition for the building itself. That is why I wanted to explore something like this. Maybe I should ask this question in the FAQ. It would great if the rest of the competitors could comment on this.

April 30th, 2007	#11 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP The second image looks very well composited! I like the contrast of colors right now even though its in a conceptual stage. It will be interesting to see it develop. Great start...keep it coming! __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

May 1st, 2007	#16 (permalink)
aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 703 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP I think you should consider the second view with the railing in the foreground partially visible under a block of ice as if the viewer is standing on the ice. Right now, the second view looks like the viewer is floating in the air. My preference overall is for the portrait format. __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

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Continuumx Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: San Francisco Age: 37 Posts: 143 Name: Tyrone Marshall	Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP Hello Ernesto, This image has a great feel and sense of dramatic intrigue. The conceptual nature is a fine work with an interesting POV and environment.

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Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP Earnesto...the sketch is very beautiful and scenic. But I feel that in context of AVC the main structure is not in enough focus in this composition. There will be a lot going on with the valley and snow...maybe zoom into towards the building a bit...? __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

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CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 818 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Ernesto Pacheco - WIP Thanks for your comments Neha. I feel the same way about this composition. However, I am not aware of any rule that says that we need use no less than 50% of our composition for the building itself. That is why I wanted to explore something like this. Maybe I should ask this question in the FAQ. It would great if the rest of the competitors could comment on this.

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