miaomiao lin - WIP

miaomiao lin · April 30th, 2007

hello,
Max,vray,hdri.
Would like to hear your comments. Thanks.

aaron-cds · April 30th, 2007

I love the mood. Great start with the lighting.

leed · May 1st, 2007

lovely view and atmosphere.

but there is a problem with the scale in the image, I know is a wip but the water looks small and the cliff looks normal size, which makes the building seem small scale.

great start.

Lee

CHE · May 1st, 2007

I really like the idea of a flooded city. The mood that you are going for is great. Try adding more patched of buildings in the background.

BR1AN · May 1st, 2007

This is looking nice so far. I think once the background is built up more you will feel the depth.

julie hsieh · May 1st, 2007

Hi Miaomiao...

What a dramatic start! I like it very much and especially the lighting which together with the water creates a cold and damp feeling to it. I haven't read your story yet and the image has intrigued me to read it.

I would agree with others with respect to the background structures. To me they seem disengaged from the main subject (your building in the foreground) and seem to serve only as background filler, if they were integrated more somehow to the foreground it would reinforce the dramatic view you are establishing.

cg.fan · May 2nd, 2007

It's very nice,I like the feeling of this image,can't wait too see your update!

good luck!

Neha · May 2nd, 2007

Very nice start! I can imagine how it look once lit up with lights from inside the castle...

exquisitus3d1 · May 7th, 2007

I never doubt that you can create a surprising real photo!

liuxianfang · May 9th, 2007

very good composition and atmosphere! good luck!

April 30th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 703 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP I love the mood. Great start with the lighting. __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

May 1st, 2007	#3 (permalink)
leed Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Cardiff Posts: 178 Name: Lee David	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP lovely view and atmosphere. but there is a problem with the scale in the image, I know is a wip but the water looks small and the cliff looks normal size, which makes the building seem small scale. great start. Lee __________________ www.buzzbox.eu

May 1st, 2007	#4 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 818 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP I really like the idea of a flooded city. The mood that you are going for is great. Try adding more patched of buildings in the background.

May 1st, 2007	#5 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP This is looking nice so far. I think once the background is built up more you will feel the depth.

May 1st, 2007	#6 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP Hi Miaomiao... What a dramatic start! I like it very much and especially the lighting which together with the water creates a cold and damp feeling to it. I haven't read your story yet and the image has intrigued me to read it. I would agree with others with respect to the background structures. To me they seem disengaged from the main subject (your building in the foreground) and seem to serve only as background filler, if they were integrated more somehow to the foreground it would reinforce the dramatic view you are establishing. __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 2nd, 2007	#7 (permalink)
cg.fan Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: china Posts: 19 Name: wu fan wu	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP It's very nice,I like the feeling of this image,can't wait too see your update! good luck!

May 2nd, 2007	#8 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP Very nice start! I can imagine how it look once lit up with lights from inside the castle... __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

May 7th, 2007	#9 (permalink)
exquisitus3d1 Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: gui yang Age: 36 Posts: 61 Name: xiaoge liu	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP I never doubt that you can create a surprising real photo! __________________ Understand me http://www.exquisitus3d.com./ contact me xiaogeliu@126.com

May 9th, 2007	#10 (permalink)
liuxianfang Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 160 Name: xianfang liu	Re: miaomiao lin - WIP very good composition and atmosphere! good luck!

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