Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11)

Neha · May 5th, 2007

I'm done with most of the modeling. I have to detail out some areas, fix up some parts of the new gates, some more work left in the garden too. But this is what I have in mind for the final camera angle and the composition.

Please ignore the burnt out areas, they look this way because I was using a white override material while working on modeling and composition...this level of lighting looks fine with textures.

BR1AN · May 5th, 2007

Very clever using the different pieces of the model to fill up the space. How do you plan to do the vegetation? I think this has a lot of potential to fill up with lush plants and such.

Neha · May 5th, 2007

Thanks Brian. I've designed the garden just like a typical mughal garden. Due to the white material its not very evident now. The plantation is very controlled and systematic in Mughal gardens...

TheAllusionist · May 5th, 2007

Very impressive looking so far Neha, this looks right up your alley

Neha · May 6th, 2007

Thanks Russell...I'm enjoying this a lot

miaomiao lin · May 6th, 2007

The garden that the fortress becomes you, continue your first viewpoint, would be more fine.The small post of the right side seems to be too fragmentary apparently

aaron-cds · May 6th, 2007

This is coming along. I really think the composition is near perfect. The one thing that bothers me about your added model is the repetition of the small guard house elements on top of the wall on the right. The large element in the wall balances nicely with the main buiding without competing too much. However, the smaller repetitive elements are too busy and are a distraction for me. Great work, keep it up.

Neha · May 6th, 2007

Thanks for the suggestions Aaron & miaomiao. Aaron, although this kind of structure is common in Mughal palace walls, for the purpose of this composition you are correct, I'll model a simpler design for top portion of the boundary wall.

noart_2004 · May 6th, 2007

very good job, when there will be trees and textures, it looked great...
benoit.

Neha · May 6th, 2007

Thanks benoit

An update...

May 5th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) Very clever using the different pieces of the model to fill up the space. How do you plan to do the vegetation? I think this has a lot of potential to fill up with lush plants and such.

May 5th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) Thanks Brian. I've designed the garden just like a typical mughal garden. Due to the white material its not very evident now. The plantation is very controlled and systematic in Mughal gardens... __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

May 5th, 2007	#4 (permalink)
TheAllusionist Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 409 Name: Russell Thomas	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) Very impressive looking so far Neha, this looks right up your alley __________________ The Opinions Expressed Here Do Not Necessarily Reflect Those of a Rational Mind. 3DAllusions \| 3DAllusions Studio \| MrMaterials

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Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) Thanks Russell...I'm enjoying this a lot __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

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miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) The garden that the fortress becomes you, continue your first viewpoint, would be more fine.The small post of the right side seems to be too fragmentary apparently

May 6th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 703 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) This is coming along. I really think the composition is near perfect. The one thing that bothers me about your added model is the repetition of the small guard house elements on top of the wall on the right. The large element in the wall balances nicely with the main buiding without competing too much. However, the smaller repetitive elements are too busy and are a distraction for me. Great work, keep it up. __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

May 6th, 2007	#8 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) Thanks for the suggestions Aaron & miaomiao. Aaron, although this kind of structure is common in Mughal palace walls, for the purpose of this composition you are correct, I'll model a simpler design for top portion of the boundary wall. __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

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noart_2004 Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Paris Age: 34 Posts: 48 Name: Patterlini benoit	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11) very good job, when there will be trees and textures, it looked great... benoit.

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