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Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP
The composition is good. I like the focus on the bridge and its structure. It's my preference, but I would apply a camera correction to get rid of the third vanishing point. The lighting doesn't really look like sunlight. The colors and value are off slightly. I can't put my finger on it, but there's something about the lighting that is unrealistic. Perhaps it's too yellow and saturated for the position of the sun.
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Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP
Hi!
I see that jokes ended!  Big job!The very good idea with the cast-iron- bridge! Meseems that behind the bridge it should be something more brightly. Most likely illuminations should there overlap. Thats my opinion. See You later! |
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Thanks Aaron! I think I wouldn't get rid of the third vanishing point. I like it. But I'm going to try it for sure. You are copletely right with the lighting thing. I don't like either. I haven't really cared about it in the last days. I should I know. But first I want to make a pretty modell. |
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Maybe your idea will come true. |
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Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP
Some detailes... (lighting is still insignificant)
I'm leaving now. My mouse has got tired and it's time to enjoy the beautiful summer evening in Budapest.  Happy weekend to all of you! |
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Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP
I love you attention to detail. The whole scene is too yellow right now, but like you said you have more work on the lights, so I guess you know it
The poles that get cut at the top seem a bit disturbing to me, maybe you can redesign them with less height or remove them...
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Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP
Hi zoli!
The texture is excellent. How careful! I should make more efforts. I think the color of lighting is not ideal at the present condition. Looking forward your further image! |
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