Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18)

zoli · May 16th, 2007

The poles are getting smaller as Neha suggested.

Perhaps they are going to be even smaller.
Finally I found the background image in my photo album, it was taken in Japan on my way to one of the last corners of the world. That's how I felt that time.

Luckily the model covers up the road in the backgroun image.
But I am anxious for the distance between the model and the background-montains and I don't really know how to solve this contrast.

zoli · May 16th, 2007

Oh, and the image...

miaomiao lin · May 16th, 2007

The yellow of the appearance is very thick heavy, the saturation degree decline down, increase some reds and can be better?The sky of the background, order beautiful clouds more, the color of the evening would be better perhaps

julie hsieh · May 16th, 2007

Hi Zoli,

Its looking good! Your material work is very nicely done. Lighting is nice too, albeit it needs some saturation adjustment. The only thing is the background. I feel that it doesn't match the lighting setup so much, but I am sure you are still working away.

zoli · May 18th, 2007

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CHE · May 19th, 2007

It is coming along quite nicely. I think that you have done a great job with the lighting. I personally like the last option with the lighter sky. The hase looks nice but I don't know if it fits the overall mood of your composition.

liuxianfang · May 19th, 2007

Hi Zoltan Kovacs ,There's a point you have to pay attention to, that is you need to make the pic frame could show more of the left and sky. Good luck!

noart_2004 · May 21st, 2007

good work zoltan....

May 16th, 2007	#1 (permalink)
zoli Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Budapest Age: 29 Posts: 94 Name: Zoltan Kovacs	Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) The poles are getting smaller as Neha suggested. Perhaps they are going to be even smaller. Finally I found the background image in my photo album, it was taken in Japan on my way to one of the last corners of the world. That's how I felt that time. Luckily the model covers up the road in the backgroun image. But I am anxious for the distance between the model and the background-montains and I don't really know how to solve this contrast.

May 16th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) The yellow of the appearance is very thick heavy, the saturation degree decline down, increase some reds and can be better?The sky of the background, order beautiful clouds more, the color of the evening would be better perhaps

May 16th, 2007	#4 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) Hi Zoli, Its looking good! Your material work is very nicely done. Lighting is nice too, albeit it needs some saturation adjustment. The only thing is the background. I feel that it doesn't match the lighting setup so much, but I am sure you are still working away. __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 19th, 2007	#6 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 820 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) It is coming along quite nicely. I think that you have done a great job with the lighting. I personally like the last option with the lighter sky. The hase looks nice but I don't know if it fits the overall mood of your composition.

May 19th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
liuxianfang Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 160 Name: xianfang liu	Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) Hi Zoltan Kovacs ,There's a point you have to pay attention to, that is you need to make the pic frame could show more of the left and sky. Good luck!

May 21st, 2007	#8 (permalink)
noart_2004 Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Paris Age: 34 Posts: 48 Name: Patterlini benoit	Re: Zoltan Kovacs - WIP (May 18) good work zoltan....

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