nok li-WIP(May 18)

nok li · May 16th, 2007

upload..

nok li · May 18th, 2007

new pic

neil09 · May 18th, 2007

Nice work so far. I think down side of the building and environment would be bit brighter.

aaron-cds · May 18th, 2007

Enchanting. I think the composition is wonderful. The only thing that is a negative are the small flimsy looking buildings next to a beautiful building. What are those?

nok li · May 18th, 2007

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Originally Posted by neil09

Nice work so far. I think down side of the building and environment would be bit brighter.

Thanks,i will try

nok li · May 18th, 2007

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Originally Posted by aaron-cds

Enchanting. I think the composition is wonderful. The only thing that is a negative are the small flimsy looking buildings next to a beautiful building. What are those?

about that problem , in my opinion ,i can add some local old buildings , old architecture which appeared in storys in this town ,then i can cut in some glass mass on them , if can do like that , i can not only keep old style ,but also showing some futuristic !
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aaron-cds · May 18th, 2007

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Originally Posted by nok li

about that problem , in my opinion ,we can add some local old buildings , old architecture which appeared in storys in this town ,then we can cut in some glass mass on them , if can do like that , we can not only keep old style ,but also showing some futuristic !
image of model:

Certainly, I just think that the added buildings present a needless distraction to your beautiful building and background. I think if you took them out, your finished rendering would be much stronger. Although, it may not fit with your story line. I just feel that the building you're portraying is a beautiful castle on a vast estate with no other structures. Those buildings are like the birds that ride around on the backs of rhinos.

Man, I just love the lighting, texturing and ivy on the main building. It's amazing.

Another thing that strikes me is Asian architecture placed adjacent to a completely different architectural style - English, Anglo-saxon, whatever it is - architectural history was never my strong suit.

CHE · May 18th, 2007

Your piece is looking great. I really like the painted background. The color scheme is beautiful. Lighting is nice, and the texture work is very impressive. I am looking forward to see the final composition.

wangfeng · May 18th, 2007

it's great ! so fantastic!,if you can add some scene details ,it would be perfect !

julie hsieh · May 18th, 2007

Wonderful as I expected. Sky is too saturated in pink for me though. Other than that I like it! I wonder if it would look pretty or distracting if you added dimmed lights just at the bottom of the building?

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neil09 Junior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Kolkata Age: 30 Posts: 19 Name: Indranil Ray	Re: nok li-WIP(May 18) Nice work so far. I think down side of the building and environment would be bit brighter. __________________ Yet all experience is an arch wherethro’ Gleams that untravell’d world, whose margin fades For ever and for ever when I move. How dull it is to pause, to make an end..... ....Ulysses of Alfraid Tennyson http://www.3d2design.com/aboutme_neil.html

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aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 703 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: nok li-WIP(May 18) Enchanting. I think the composition is wonderful. The only thing that is a negative are the small flimsy looking buildings next to a beautiful building. What are those? __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

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CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 820 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: nok li-WIP(May 18) Your piece is looking great. I really like the painted background. The color scheme is beautiful. Lighting is nice, and the texture work is very impressive. I am looking forward to see the final composition.

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wangfeng Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijin Posts: 13 Name: feng wang	Re: nok li-WIP(May 18) it's great ! so fantastic!,if you can add some scene details ,it would be perfect !

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julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: nok li-WIP(May 18) Wonderful as I expected. Sky is too saturated in pink for me though. Other than that I like it! I wonder if it would look pretty or distracting if you added dimmed lights just at the bottom of the building? __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

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