Ukamti

Hi there,

Its my latest work after a long gap! Was not able to do something in such a long time. I know this view looks a little paler in its essence but still it worked good for the client. He is almost happy with it.

I need your suggestions! As far as i believe that there is always a possibility of improvements.

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Hey I have tried and re-rendered the view have a look and comment!

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chadw

I think you have done a nice job with textures... the grass on the left is tiling a little... but the house looks nice and the stone walls look good as well.

I think the leaves on the trees are out of scale.... they look very big. The blend of the more "hand-drawn" aspects and the photo-real is not quite convincing yet. But more to the point I am having a hard time identifying a focal point to this image. Perhaps the entrance should have more of a welcoming feel to it.... seems a bit to dark and makes your eye look up at the bump above or at the car in the driveway. The big tree behind the house does not have enough atmospheric perspective and as such looks like it is growing right out of the roof of the house.... perhaps it is.... if that is not the case it needs to loose some detail and sit back on the canvas. Did you run a filter on the cars? I am a little confused by them. The stone wall on the left looks maybe a little too blurry.

As the viewer I wonder were I am that I am seeing the house for this view.... standing on a hill perhaps. Is there nothing in the foreground which might ground the image.

Overall I think it looks good. Hope this is at all helpful.

Ukamti

Hi Chad,

You really got the nerves where it pains! Really I had never thought of any focal point in the view. You are right when you say that the blend of trees to the view does not look good. But at this moment I am experimenting with the vegetation part and does not have good alternatives. I will do something to create the focal point and arrange the reflection of leaves in the windows. Hey dont care about the grass tiling gives like newly mown grass ( Hey So much to hide our own mistakes! ) I ll give it another try as I am at this moment also working with MR lighting which is totally new thing to me I ll find out something! A Great Thanks for the suggestions buddy!

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