Business Park Office

Bwana Kahawa · August 15th, 2007

Hi all,
latest work attached - an exterior of an office in a business park.

Modelled in Form Z, Maxwell for rendering, Photoshop for post.

Not sure about the people...

Any comments / crits most welcome!

Derek

PAWUK · August 15th, 2007

Nice image.....apart from the people. They draw the eye to much and look ..out of place.

innerdream · August 15th, 2007

Agreed.

geardaddy1 · August 15th, 2007

good start! I agree with the people...no good. The saturation is off compared to the rendering. Plus the shadows are not consistant. Dark shadows under the cars...light washed out shadows for the peps. One other thing...the blacktop in the parking lot is repeating. I would add a composite layer on top of that with a noise/cloud texture.

aldofarias82 · August 15th, 2007

yep i think those people look very bad on a good image like yours, can you talk about your render settings? i like how the textures on the ground keep their sharpness, i always get them burned or whashed.

3dSol · August 15th, 2007

very nice image, the people need some contrast or just use some abstracts, also the horizontal bands on the building do not resemble a material because they look abstract, there is no detail of their construction technique

good luck!

August 15th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
PAWUK Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Walsall Posts: 254 Name: Paul Wild	Re: Business Park Office Nice image.....apart from the people. They draw the eye to much and look ..out of place.

August 15th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
innerdream Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: LA Posts: 596 Name: Robert M	Re: Business Park Office Agreed.

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geardaddy1 Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 48 Name: David Whiteman	Re: Business Park Office good start! I agree with the people...no good. The saturation is off compared to the rendering. Plus the shadows are not consistant. Dark shadows under the cars...light washed out shadows for the peps. One other thing...the blacktop in the parking lot is repeating. I would add a composite layer on top of that with a noise/cloud texture.

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aldofarias82 Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: chihuahua Age: 25 Posts: 35 Name: aldo farias	Re: Business Park Office yep i think those people look very bad on a good image like yours, can you talk about your render settings? i like how the textures on the ground keep their sharpness, i always get them burned or whashed. __________________ VIVA MEXICO

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3dSol Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: la paz Posts: 117 Name: maurice arduz	Re: Business Park Office very nice image, the people need some contrast or just use some abstracts, also the horizontal bands on the building do not resemble a material because they look abstract, there is no detail of their construction technique good luck!

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