Micx

Hello,
Here is our latest render to date, a penthouse balcony, you can see an island in the background .. c&c are welcome.

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Penthouse Balcony.jpg (213.4 KB, 322 views)

PAWUK

looking good, you might want to ground your chairs and table set look at the back legs and shadows ,floating about 10mm of the ground. Also the table set looks abit dark .

The timber above the door seems to be reflective giving it a gloss laminate look

Koper

like your composition. your render is nice and sharp.
i just think the flowers and bg image is letting the image a bit down. did you add them in post production or are they rendered with the image?
flowers a bit too bright as they are now, and i feel they should be smaller. I also cant decide if your horizon in the bg image is a bit low.

other than that, it looks like a place i'd like to sit in the sun and have a beer!

JonRashid

The shadow on your foliage needs breaking up. It would only be straight if they were flat as they actually are

Quique

I like the image overall. I also agree about adjusting the background image. The background's key light is from the left, while the main light from your scene is from the right.

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Micx

Thanks CG friends for c&c, I will reply as follows:
PAWUK- thanks for the comment, yes indeed I didnt notice the chairs and table set floating.. geeezz I will make the correction and the table in the front is black granite and chair black synthetic rattan according to the interior decorator direction.
KOPER -all plants are composited in the scene and rendered, no post production in photoshop, maybe I should reduce the saturation of the flowers and re render it, the penthouse is at the 2nd floor that why the bg image look a bit low..anyway you can come and have a beer anytime you want here in the tropic .. cheers !!
JONRASHID - yes you are right . it's a plane with a map on it. I shud break it down in photoshop to get a better depth of shadows in the plants. in btween, I'm looking for a plant generating software who can let me produce this type of foliage that hangover, can you name me some ? Speedtree dont do this...
QUIQUE - The background image I have notice that after the photoshooting we made on the site, but we have no choice we have to cast light from the right to show details in the penthouse balcony, the image is used for commercial purpose..anyway only artists can see that..thnks you all will come back later with another image in this project.

Micx

Hello,
here is the penthouse living area, which also share the same view of the balcony. c&c are welcome.

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Penthouse Living.jpg (124.5 KB, 55 views)

Koper

is it an oclusion pass you put on the image, i think its a bit heavy on the wall/roof intersections.

the image is very good, maybe just make the bg image brighter

Micx

thanks Koper for the comment, here is the update of the cgi, I have reduce the ambient occlusion a bit and desaturated the background and add a bit of blur onto it.

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Penthouse CGarchi.jpg (157.4 KB, 31 views)

ovzoc

If it is a penthouse I would lower the horizon of the bg image. Also the vegetation needs improvement(bad perspective and over exposure).

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