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Old December 14th, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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This is a house that I am working on, Just thought I would post a render and see what everyone thinks.
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as a wip it really is coming along nice. no comment needed on lighting and shadows and reflections as it's a wip, but watch for tiling materials and all those whites being too clean.

also, dont forget to model ridge tiles on the roof, and model some interior details in the rooms too, to give the glazing some depth.

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Yea I know I need some ridge tiles that is still to come, I am not going to model any interior stuff this is just a rendering for marketing. I will most likely just add some fullage and walkway very simple and clean looking and crank up the render setting a bit.
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Looks really good so far. Is that an AmbientLight shingle texture?
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Looks really good so far. Is that an AmbientLight shingle texture?
I think that one is from Merlin Studio's Roof Pack.
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Here is an update to let you see how I am coming along.

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looking very good!
those 3 shrubs on the left could use some variation they look too identical
also the blue environment light is quite strong and makes me a bit cold

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also there's something strange with the glass, it's very reflective but it doesn't reflect anything from the environment
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I'd take a look at toning down the saturation of the trees behind and to the side of the house. I think it will help make the house "pop" a little bit more.

Your shrubs are geometry right? If you don't mind me asking, where did you get the shrubs on the right with the little yellow flowers?
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