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Join Date: Dec 2001
Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK.
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Name: Stephen Leworthy |
as a wip it really is coming along nice. no comment needed on lighting and shadows and reflections as it's a wip, but watch for tiling materials and all those whites being too clean.
also, dont forget to model ridge tiles on the roof, and model some interior details in the rooms too, to give the glazing some depth. |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: WA
Posts: 37
Name: Erik Peterson |
Yea I know I need some ridge tiles that is still to come, I am not going to model any interior stuff this is just a rendering for marketing. I will most likely just add some fullage and walkway very simple and clean looking and crank up the render setting a bit.
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: la paz
Posts: 117
Name: maurice arduz |
looking very good!
those 3 shrubs on the left could use some variation they look too identical also the blue environment light is quite strong and makes me a bit cold good luck! |
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Missouri
Posts: 155
Name: Matt McDonald |
I'd take a look at toning down the saturation of the trees behind and to the side of the house. I think it will help make the house "pop" a little bit more.
Your shrubs are geometry right? If you don't mind me asking, where did you get the shrubs on the right with the little yellow flowers? |
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