Steel Panel Homes

ebad · December 17th, 2007

Hi all, I'm back again with new project.
I have provided some interior and exterior views, And it's nice to know your Ideas.
Software : Max 9.0 and vray & photoshop,
C&C are welcome.

I have faced some bad memory problems with win xp 32bit and I wanna switch to 64bit.
I have an error like this: "Bitmap paging file error because of low memory.. the bitmap may render incorrect" and something like this..
I have 3GB of DDR2 Ram, But when I recieve this error its used arround 1.3GB.
In the other hand when I use Max environment in dirrect3D mode, I offen get critical errors causes terminate the application!!
Thanks.

The Trickster · December 17th, 2007

Hi, nice renders, i like them. Reflections on the windows of the exteriors are a bit overpowering and it would be nice to see some depth in there. But i know there isnt always time!

Well done.

rus_media · December 17th, 2007

Nice work except reflection on the window glass.

ebad · December 17th, 2007

Thanks about comments,I will fix the reflection problem.
Here's some new works:
Like to know what do you think

ebad · December 23rd, 2007

Some new images again

ebad · December 23rd, 2007

isn't any comment there?
No Idea for 9 new works?

help me getting better please.

vizwhiz · December 24th, 2007

Ebad

your Images are great!

i cant give any comments because your work is so much better Than mine

keep Posting Images
do you give lessons?

Thanks

randy

ebad · December 24th, 2007

Thank you dear Randy,I didnt think this way!! Thank you man!
sorry I have not any lesson.

BrianKitts · December 24th, 2007

Great images there really isn't too much to comment on.

My biggest suggestion would be to drop in some background enterouge between your scene and the the sky. The exteriors are are superb, but there is nothing grounding them to the rest of the world... you have the focal house, the surrounding enterouge then it breaks and goes straight to the sky. Almost as if your scene is composed in an empty world. A distant skyline or treeline would be the last missing piece to a great image.

On the last two exteriors: I would turn down the displacement distance on the grass. It's turned up so high that it looks unrealistic.... I would suggest trimming it up, someone falls in that yard they might impale themselves

The only other comment would be to lose the frame stamp. Personally I'm not interested in what rendering engine you use, or how long your rendering took. I feel that a good illustrator can work his/her magic regardless of what software they use... and a good image isn't about how you did it, its about the end product. If you are going to take the time to watermark the image with your company logo and call it a final, then take the time to turn off or crop out the vray frame stamp.

all the same it's a pleasure to see quality work.

-bk

ebad · December 25th, 2007

Dear Brian, Thank you very much for your exact and nice Ideas.
About the stamp really you'r right and it was a pro point

I have used 3dmodels (Proxy) as plants, in middle of image or on background.
So there was not a soft or ample treeline.
I have bought a totaltextures of plants (trees) I hope they help.
I will test it and put my result images as soon as possible.
Thanks.

December 17th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
The Trickster Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: London Age: 32 Posts: 127 Name: Phillip Grimshaw	Re: Steel Panel Homes Hi, nice renders, i like them. Reflections on the windows of the exteriors are a bit overpowering and it would be nice to see some depth in there. But i know there isnt always time! Well done.

December 17th, 2007	#3 (permalink)
rus_media Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 1 Name: rus media	Re: Steel Panel Homes Nice work except reflection on the window glass.

December 23rd, 2007	#6 (permalink)
ebad Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Iran Posts: 209 Name: Ebad Ahmadzadeh	Re: Steel Panel Homes isn't any comment there? No Idea for 9 new works? help me getting better please.

December 24th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
vizwhiz Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: arizona usa, earth/universe Age: 56 Posts: 1,009 Name: Randy Sanders	Re: Steel Panel Homes Ebad your Images are great! i cant give any comments because your work is so much better Than mine keep Posting Images do you give lessons? Thanks randy

December 24th, 2007	#8 (permalink)
ebad Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Iran Posts: 209 Name: Ebad Ahmadzadeh	Re: Steel Panel Homes Thank you dear Randy,I didnt think this way!! Thank you man! sorry I have not any lesson.

December 24th, 2007	#9 (permalink)
BrianKitts Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Columbus, Ohio Age: 28 Posts: 1,535 Name: Brian Kitts	Re: Steel Panel Homes Great images there really isn't too much to comment on. My biggest suggestion would be to drop in some background enterouge between your scene and the the sky. The exteriors are are superb, but there is nothing grounding them to the rest of the world... you have the focal house, the surrounding enterouge then it breaks and goes straight to the sky. Almost as if your scene is composed in an empty world. A distant skyline or treeline would be the last missing piece to a great image. On the last two exteriors: I would turn down the displacement distance on the grass. It's turned up so high that it looks unrealistic.... I would suggest trimming it up, someone falls in that yard they might impale themselves The only other comment would be to lose the frame stamp. Personally I'm not interested in what rendering engine you use, or how long your rendering took. I feel that a good illustrator can work his/her magic regardless of what software they use... and a good image isn't about how you did it, its about the end product. If you are going to take the time to watermark the image with your company logo and call it a final, then take the time to turn off or crop out the vray frame stamp. all the same it's a pleasure to see quality work. -bk __________________ Brian Kitts ANSHEN + ALLEN Last edited by BrianKitts; December 24th, 2007 at 04:47 PM.

December 25th, 2007	#10 (permalink)
ebad Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Iran Posts: 209 Name: Ebad Ahmadzadeh	Re: Steel Panel Homes Dear Brian, Thank you very much for your exact and nice Ideas. About the stamp really you'r right and it was a pro point I have used 3dmodels (Proxy) as plants, in middle of image or on background. So there was not a soft or ample treeline. I have bought a totaltextures of plants (trees) I hope they help. I will test it and put my result images as soon as possible. Thanks.

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