Hakuei residence

kiittea · February 22nd, 2008

Hi all,

This is a recreation of a photograph of Akira Sakamoto's Minimalist Residence - Hakuei residence.
C&C needed

Roest · February 22nd, 2008

Hi Kittu,

Nice lighting!

Its a good start but this isn't your final image right?
If it is;
- you need higher irradiance map settings and AA settings,
- You can see the vertical glass lines but not the horizontal? maybe add some detail here.
- I think you can improve the bump off the wood which looks like it is not every where.
- If i look at the photo it looks like the bottom off the window must lower then the floor.

Other then that, there is some post work to do (levels, contrast).

Good luck hope it helps a bit!

kiittea · February 22nd, 2008

Hey Jeroen, Thanks for the crits.

I sure will work on it and definitely look into things what you've mentioned. Shall post an update soon. I guess this shud have been in WIP section

February 22nd, 2008	#2 (permalink)
Roest Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Groningen Age: 26 Posts: 130 Name: Jeroen Prins	Re: Hakuei residence Hi Kittu, Nice lighting! Its a good start but this isn't your final image right? If it is; - you need higher irradiance map settings and AA settings, - You can see the vertical glass lines but not the horizontal? maybe add some detail here. - I think you can improve the bump off the wood which looks like it is not every where. - If i look at the photo it looks like the bottom off the window must lower then the floor. Other then that, there is some post work to do (levels, contrast). Good luck hope it helps a bit!

February 22nd, 2008	#3 (permalink)
kiittea Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Hyderabad, India Age: 25 Posts: 87 Name: G kittu	Re: Hakuei residence Hey Jeroen, Thanks for the crits. I sure will work on it and definitely look into things what you've mentioned. Shall post an update soon. I guess this shud have been in WIP section

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