Jakub Gabriel - WIP - Page 2

amer abidi · May 7th, 2008

lovin the dynamism and scale of all this! =) looking forward to the next few days to see how this develops. Good Luck Jakub!

As for water, I thought you'de go for something calmer.. as your design is an open summer sort of setting? anyway, what i think it needs is direction (orientation) at the moment it's lurking in place, if you know what i mean?

Koper · May 7th, 2008

Estoy de acuerdo con que el agua no está lo suficientemente fluido
Aparte de eso…. Van Van Van Van Van Van

Adrian Bold · May 7th, 2008

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Originally Posted by Horhe

Thanks. Yes the camera will be animated inside the 'fish' torso as well showing the monumental construction.

Did you say you're wanting to animate the construction process? Or did i read that wrong.

chutti · May 8th, 2008

great going jacob. nice cameras to fill any viewer. couple of interior shots needed. i am not convinced with your water yet, agree with amer it needs direction (check mine

). good luck.

Horhe · May 11th, 2008

Thanks for all the posts and comments Ill try to take them into account. I have a bit tight schedule at the moment so Ill reply to your posts later on.
This is my next WIP update.

I added some wavebreakers in a circular pattern. I think that helps the center 'fit in' more nicely.
Added some boats docking aswell.

Will update further in a couple of days.

RodT · May 16th, 2008

tres bien! how nice would it be to go there and have some sushi and a nice bottle of wine...

flavio · May 17th, 2008

I think the apparencce of your water will depend on your lighting ... i think is realistic enough is how the building will interact with it.
The structure looks great and i love the fact that you add the boats on the centre of the scheme

Horhe · May 17th, 2008

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tres bien! how nice would it be to go there and have some sushi and a nice bottle of wine...

Yep sushi, apart from butter fish... yuck...
Thanks Rod.

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I think the apparencce of your water will depend on your lighting ... i think is realistic enough is how the building will interact with it.
The structure looks great and i love the fact that you add the boats on the centre of the scheme

Very true I think.
Well time is ticking and there a lot of changes I had to surpass. Adding to that its hard to fit in the general timetable of this competition.
Thanks glad you like it Flavio.

Horhe · May 19th, 2008

A short low res part of the animation.
The camera heads up from above the musem.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Ss5V5BKex8

M_acto · May 19th, 2008

Looks so great, very interesting. What about render time?

May 7th, 2008	#11 (permalink)
amer abidi Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Jordan Age: 31 Posts: 304 Name: amer abidi	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP lovin the dynamism and scale of all this! =) looking forward to the next few days to see how this develops. Good Luck Jakub! As for water, I thought you'de go for something calmer.. as your design is an open summer sort of setting? anyway, what i think it needs is direction (orientation) at the moment it's lurking in place, if you know what i mean? __________________ "Well I figure it has to be bigger than smaller. Whats the point of designing a concept the size of a hot dog stand? " J.G.

May 7th, 2008	#12 (permalink)
Koper Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Hague, Holland Age: 26 Posts: 1,017 Name: AdriaaN van Jaarsveld	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP Estoy de acuerdo con que el agua no está lo suficientemente fluido Aparte de eso…. Van Van Van Van Van Van __________________ _____________________ AvJ www.nationalgraphix.com _____________________

May 8th, 2008	#14 (permalink)
chutti Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Dhaka Age: 30 Posts: 310 Name: chutti ullah	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP great going jacob. nice cameras to fill any viewer. couple of interior shots needed. i am not convinced with your water yet, agree with amer it needs direction (check mine ). good luck.

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RodT Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Grand Junction, CO Age: 58 Posts: 182 Name: Roderick Thonen	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP tres bien! how nice would it be to go there and have some sushi and a nice bottle of wine... __________________ www.blurringreality.com

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flavio Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Age: 34 Posts: 43 Name: Flavio Ochoa	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP I think the apparencce of your water will depend on your lighting ... i think is realistic enough is how the building will interact with it. The structure looks great and i love the fact that you add the boats on the centre of the scheme

May 19th, 2008	#19 (permalink)
Horhe Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Poland Age: 26 Posts: 1,131 Name: Jakub Gabriel	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP A short low res part of the animation. The camera heads up from above the musem. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Ss5V5BKex8 __________________ Im starting to suspect that the world is a rendering... www.JakubGabriel.com \| DoodlesWhileCookingNoodles

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M_acto Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Madrid Age: 29 Posts: 23 Name: David Acto Gonzalez	Re: Jakub Gabriel - WIP Looks so great, very interesting. What about render time? __________________ http://impacto3d.com/

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