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Name: Sherif Massoud  |
office-interior..
Hi,
I know that this one also may looks like many of my previous work  , but even though, I like to share this with you and have your openion, even in fast work like this. http://3dshore.com/stills/Office-3.jpg |
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Re: office-interior..
Hi...
The first thing that jumps out at me is the desk lamp with the coloured shade. It's not casting any coloured light around it. I'd either remove it, or make it cast coloured light on the other objects. Nice detail on the ceiling. |
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May 13th, 2008
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Name: Louis Choinière  |
Re: office-interior..
Hey sherif
your IES are too high. Try also to remove some dust on the plant pot. Your picture frame lack of details. overall, is a good job but it lack of the little thing that is needed to let us forget that it is CG. Don't put the lenseflare though |
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Re: office-interior..
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Try using higher render settings, too. Just some C&C, but pretty good work overall. |
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Re: office-interior..
AGAIN sheriff, the room is lit, but we don't see any ceiling lights!!
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