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Old May 12th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Steel panel homes (Fall collection Interior)

This is two different side of a home, In first image you see the kitchen in
the right side.. And in the 2nd image you see the livingroom and entry
door..
Software : 3ds max 9.0 and VRay
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Beautifull lighting.how many lights have u used ?can u tell us little behind the scene.
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very nice indeed
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yeah, great images!

only issue i can see is with the end of the wall units and the breakfast bench -the bit with 4 bottles on, i'm not exactly sure what is going there? is it part of the design?, is it a mapping / modeling error.

after spending a little time looking at it i think it is part of the design... however it jumps out as being wrong to me in regards to the image, it look as if the perspective is off.
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Very nice work.

My only comments are about the noise on the fridge and the black cupboard doors,
bring your subdivisions on your glossies a bit higher.

But very nice mood overall
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yup, also some poor aa happening, and a lot of gi splotching going on, specially around the doors
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yeah the fridge material and the splotching were the only two things I was going to mention. An increase in subdivisions would sort both but reflect interpolation ticked on your metal mat would help alot. It wont give you as accurate reflections but they will be smoother...

Really nice light though and you capture the feel of the rooms well. I like the picture of the lovlies on the wall too. :P
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I like the picture of the lovlies on the wall too. :P
the flowers and tree? hmmm, strange Scottser.
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Good work..as all your previous work..

My comments will not differ from what have been said already..

A minor comment is about the background in the second image, don't know but I think you have to work on it a little bit.
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Good looking renderings!...but you may want to put sills under the exterior doors....It may get a bit drafty in there.
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