RP's residence

navnow · May 17th, 2008

hi
this is my first post...and this is one of my best works.

thanks
warm rgds
naveen

fadi3d · May 17th, 2008

nice work although on my screen it looks a bit pale and i think u should add some more detail.keep it up ur on the wright track.

navnow · May 18th, 2008

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Originally Posted by fadi3d

nice work although on my screen it looks a bit pale and i think u should add some more detail.keep it up ur on the wright track.

thanx for ur comments fadi....
Which portion of the image u think needs more detail?

Horhe · May 18th, 2008

Overall looks good.
Some crits:
1) Image seems blurry could use some sharpening
2) It looking too gray I recon. Try adding a yellow/blue tint. A combination of those two colours will get you a more realistic image.
3) The vegetation seems blurry and overall too dim. Might use some brighness/contrast.
4) The compostion looks a bit boring. Too much asphalt is showing - either get a car in or cut some of the road off.

navnow · May 19th, 2008

hi horhe,
thanks for ur response... will keep ur points in mind.

May 17th, 2008	#1 (permalink)
navnow Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: bangalore Posts: 27 Name: naveen kumar	RP's residence hi this is my first post...and this is one of my best works. thanks warm rgds naveen Last edited by navnow; June 12th, 2008 at 07:35 AM.

May 17th, 2008	#2 (permalink)
fadi3d Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: lebanon Posts: 147 Name: Fadi soueidi	Re: RP's residence nice work although on my screen it looks a bit pale and i think u should add some more detail.keep it up ur on the wright track.

May 18th, 2008	#4 (permalink)
Horhe Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Poland Age: 26 Posts: 1,131 Name: Jakub Gabriel	Re: RP's residence Overall looks good. Some crits: 1) Image seems blurry could use some sharpening 2) It looking too gray I recon. Try adding a yellow/blue tint. A combination of those two colours will get you a more realistic image. 3) The vegetation seems blurry and overall too dim. Might use some brighness/contrast. 4) The compostion looks a bit boring. Too much asphalt is showing - either get a car in or cut some of the road off. __________________ Im starting to suspect that the world is a rendering... www.JakubGabriel.com \| DoodlesWhileCookingNoodles

May 19th, 2008	#5 (permalink)
navnow Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: bangalore Posts: 27 Name: naveen kumar	Re: RP's residence hi horhe, thanks for ur response... will keep ur points in mind.

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