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Old May 20th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Hello, everyone.
Nice to meet you. I post serveral works for your advice or comments. try
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I think these are really great...esp. the 2nd one. I like the conceptual feel to them...are they personal projects or for a client? What software do you use? The only thing that really stands out as a bit strange are the people in the stands in the stadium scene...that needs work, but other than that I think overall these are great! Looking forward to seeing more from you Emma!
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hello there these are great except the third one .
in the first one what's with the white sky ?
in the third why is the street so dirty next to such a lovely structure ?(ps i notice this in many renders)
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hello there these are great except the third one .
in the first one what's with the white sky ?
in the third why is the street so dirty next to such a lovely structure ?(ps i notice this in many renders)
good work.take care
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I think these are really great...esp. the 2nd one. I like the conceptual feel to them...are they personal projects or for a client? What software do you use? The only thing that really stands out as a bit strange are the people in the stands in the stadium scene...that needs work, but other than that I think overall these are great! Looking forward to seeing more from you Emma!

Thanks for your advice, birdman. The 2nd one is made for an Africa client. I made model by 3D max9, use Maxwell for render and Photoshop CS2. Hope your remarks. My MSN is emma-queen@hotmail.com.
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hello there these are great except the third one .
in the first one what's with the white sky ?
in the third why is the street so dirty next to such a lovely structure ?(ps i notice this in many renders)
good work.take care

Thanks for your attention and advice. Yes, indeed dirty is due to renders problem.
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cool renders!
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I actually like the image with the dirty street (pic with BMW and pedestrian). I think it adds to the realism, though not all clients like it. The second pic could do with a bit of detail on the horizon - not too much - but enough to stop your eye from looking out to infinity. All in all, nice work.
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Your modeling is good. especially the first image. but lighting in the last image that stadium one is not so good according to me. lighting is burning the whole scene.but modeling is really good in all the images.
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