daveb867

hi guys thought i'd give the dwayne ellis bathroom scene a shot

the image was a little to big to post here so i had to post it on my blog which i am only just starting to get to grips with. everything is done apart from images in the photo frames. let me know what you guys think

here's the link

http://3ds-arch-viz.blogspot.com/

Horhe

Hey Dave Im liking it lots!
I like the warm bright lighting and look, plus the toilet has an interesting design. What bothers my eye is that the flowers are copied an mirrored - I wonder if it wouldnt look better to leave just one set in and remove the other. Seems it will look nice all in whites and creme and just the flowers having richer shades/colour/tones.

I like the blog layout aswell, Ill be checking once in a while what youve got posted up there!

Cheers

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daveb867

thanks, its the piece of work i'm most proud of to date, bit confused as to what time of day i'm tryin to convey, thats just how the render came out, wasn't really going for a 'time of day' just wanted some nice lighting in the scene, ideally i wanted to do it at different times of day, say, morning, afternoon, sunset and night, but i feel that the angle of light in that render is more true of a setting sun, in which case there should be more orange (warmer) and slightly lower intensity?

also in that render i have artifacts around the base of the shower entry and i don't know what they are from>?
any ideas?

and also if that render was a sunny 2pm shot then would the light be on in the shower? i guess so as that area doesn't receive much sunlight?

your thoughts guys?

JonRashid

Little tweaking and it could be early morning. Nice image nice blog look forward to more.