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Old June 22nd, 2008   #11 (permalink)
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i will amend it according to your opinion. thanks
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Looks like $120 well spent really.
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Hi,
Nice rendering. The building looks really crisp and effective. one thing; is it a photo montage as the perspective looks out as if the camera was a lot closser to the building than in the image. The foliage is also a give away fro this. You see too much of the underside of the high canopy. on a more positive note, it gives a really tall effect.
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Rather convincing with a nice composition, but the shadows give it away.
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Hi,

The building itself in the rendering is great. But if you choose to photo montage it against a photo/site photo make sure it matches the obvious - color, contrast and the works. If necessary, render your subject according to the date and time when the digital photo was taken. This is very easy since you can just right click on the digital photo ( if it is a jpeg ) and look at the properties. With the proper geographical orientation, your light and shadow will at least match the digital photo you took.

The rest are my comments on the image:
1. Is that a guy pulling a luggage in the middle of the road?
2. The transition between the rendered image and photo is very obvious.
3. The scale of the car is funny. I suggest it should be recomposed.

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awesome work man! keep it up!
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very good render. show one more view of that building. i love to c that. or send me on my mail id rakeshtagotra@gmail.com.....
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I would suggest getting rid of the green traffic light and cropping more of the immediate foreground out.
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