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Old June 10th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Re: architectural rendering

Nice job.
Good modeling and nice render.
Only thing I see is that the vegetation doesn't really seam to have the correct colour and the lighting of the building doesn't seam to match the foreground.
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very nice render!! may be the car needs more reflection.
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nice,, more color saturation and or contrast.. (if its not my monitor, snif)
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Nice, you really need to add more drama in the render- as folks said- color,contrast, try with gamma correction also.
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Ohh very nice render.good work.
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Very nice rendering. I would have to agree that the picture lacks the drama. A little bit of color correction and improve your shrubs.... I can't wait to see the improved rendering.
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looking forward your comments
nice work! i'm impressed...can you share w/ me the set up of your renderer?
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