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Old June 19th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Hi everyone!

I would like to show you my last project I did for a developer company.
It is a simple house. Client wanted me to show the buildings from 3 different angles + a "whole parcel view".
Lw for modeling and Vray as the rendering engine. Trees done using OnyxTreeStorm. Postprocessing in Photoshop.
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Very simple but looks pretty good. That third image bothers me though...it looks like a rendered house pasted onto a photograph of grass...looks very odd.
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Your grass is really well done!! How do you archive such realistic grass?
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Thanks for the replys.
The last one is the one I've invested most of my time cause it was the most important shot. The other shots meant to be "simple" cause the clinet wanted to see only the house without any extras like bushes, flowers ect.

The grass in this case is just a photo comped onto a render.
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Very nice renderings, I especially like the 3rd one, are the curtains PS work or rendered model? They are so realistic.

The grass with small white flowers is also very nice for the renderings.

The foreground shadows of the 4th rendering...nice
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V nice.

The last image is def the best
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Sorry but can't help but notice that the vines that are wrapped around the post in pic 3 are missing in pic 1.
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the renders are good with nice lighting.

The only comment I will make is about the downpipes. The look good and provide good detail but if these spill straight out onto the grass you will get erosion and mud at each one. This may be how it is done in Poland and I dont know what your regulations are, just my thoughts.
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the renders are good with nice lighting.

The only comment I will make is about the downpipes. The look good and provide good detail but if these spill straight out onto the grass you will get erosion and mud at each one. This may be how it is done in Poland and I dont know what your regulations are, just my thoughts.
Thats how its done here in Canada too. You might put a patio block or some crushed stone below the pipe but typically it just runs off on to the grass.
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baker1444 : yes your right.... but please keep in mind that I had only two days to finish it So some of the Ideas that came from the client were made just on one of the shots.

and here is something I've done yesterday (the same subject )

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