a dubai hopsiptal

caibe2003 · July 3rd, 2008

a dubai hopsiptal, comments please

amer abidi · July 3rd, 2008

Would've loved to see more play with light and shadows...since you could've had a very interesting pay of both with your roof structure! Other than that, i think the water is all too rough and bumpy..seems like windy sea water! not a big fan of the straight palms, sidewalk tiles mortar too thick, round, and standing out (should be opposite), and asphalt on road seems too light and 'virgin' like.

with that said, good job otherwise! =)

Claudio Branch · July 3rd, 2008

Nice modeling work...lighting still isn't there though. Too much shadow.

SandmanNinja · July 3rd, 2008

I think it looks great - maybe more Mercedes cars, just to be more realistic.

birdman67 · July 3rd, 2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Claudio Branch

Nice modeling work...lighting still isn't there though. Too much shadow.

Agreed...seems to need more contrast with stronger sunlight...very nice, it's getting there

Justin Hunt · July 3rd, 2008

IF you swing the sun around to come in from the right, towards the camera there would be the play of light and shade.

Are the people too big , cant decide

I like the design

jhv

Ky Lane · July 3rd, 2008

Shadows are a little out... the intensity of the shadow on the closest arab, and the plant next to him are out. Like Justin said, bring the sun around and get some bounces into that atrium. Car scale looks a little out too. Cant remember the last time I towered over a golf - again, that closest arab is on the same perspective plane line as the cars/people and the scale is way out. Looks great though! All the people look healthy, so the hospitals doing its job

kris McIsaac · July 3rd, 2008

From what I have seen recently this will be the smallest building in the whole city

abhijoy · July 3rd, 2008

I would like to say "wow..."

Kyle · July 4th, 2008

I agree with the light issue but I think the people don't seem to blend into the scene well enough and look they have been stuck on afterwards. Maybe try and merge them in better with shadows etc so they look part of the scene rather than an after thought.
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July 3rd, 2008	#2 (permalink)
amer abidi Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Jordan Age: 30 Posts: 230 Name: amer abidi	Re: a dubai hopsiptal Would've loved to see more play with light and shadows...since you could've had a very interesting pay of both with your roof structure! Other than that, i think the water is all too rough and bumpy..seems like windy sea water! not a big fan of the straight palms, sidewalk tiles mortar too thick, round, and standing out (should be opposite), and asphalt on road seems too light and 'virgin' like. with that said, good job otherwise! =) __________________ "Well I figure it has to be bigger than smaller. Whats the point of designing a concept the size of a hot dog stand? " J.G.

July 3rd, 2008	#3 (permalink)
Claudio Branch Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Arlington, Texas Age: 42 Posts: 726 Name: Claudio Branch	Re: a dubai hopsiptal Nice modeling work...lighting still isn't there though. Too much shadow.

July 3rd, 2008	#4 (permalink)
SandmanNinja Moderator Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Ballarat, Victoria, Australia Posts: 1,045 Name: Joel Callahan	Re: a dubai hopsiptal I think it looks great - maybe more Mercedes cars, just to be more realistic. __________________ -SandmanNinja website

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Justin Hunt Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Brisbane Age: 33 Posts: 1,295 Name: Justin Hunt	Re: a dubai hopsiptal IF you swing the sun around to come in from the right, towards the camera there would be the play of light and shade. Are the people too big , cant decide I like the design jhv

July 3rd, 2008	#7 (permalink)
Ky Lane Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 776 Name: Ky Lane	Re: a dubai hopsiptal Shadows are a little out... the intensity of the shadow on the closest arab, and the plant next to him are out. Like Justin said, bring the sun around and get some bounces into that atrium. Car scale looks a little out too. Cant remember the last time I towered over a golf - again, that closest arab is on the same perspective plane line as the cars/people and the scale is way out. Looks great though! All the people look healthy, so the hospitals doing its job

July 3rd, 2008	#8 (permalink)
kris McIsaac Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Melbourne Posts: 46 Name: Kris McIsaac	Re: a dubai hopsiptal From what I have seen recently this will be the smallest building in the whole city

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abhijoy Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Kolkata Posts: 52 Name: Abhijoy Das	Re: a dubai hopsiptal I would like to say "wow..."

July 4th, 2008	#10 (permalink)
Kyle Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 85 Name: Kyle McBride	Re: a dubai hopsiptal I agree with the light issue but I think the people don't seem to blend into the scene well enough and look they have been stuck on afterwards. Maybe try and merge them in better with shadows etc so they look part of the scene rather than an after thought. The __________________ *Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work.*

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