Simple Weekkender II

shaneis · July 25th, 2008

Second render from a personal project. Maya, mental ray and a little Photoshop jiggery-pokery. C&C most welcome.

S.

EDIT: As this place isn't likely to be built (unless I win the lottery), I flipped the image...because I can! I like it much more - the composition seems easier on the eye.

abhijoy · July 25th, 2008

Nice work liked the models.

jameson101 · July 25th, 2008

Looks good, the backround image goes well with your scene.
The only thing I can comment on is, your windows dont have curtains.

I agree the flipped image is better.

shaneis · July 25th, 2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by jameson101

Looks good, the backround image goes well with your scene.
The only thing I can comment on is, your windows dont have curtains.

I agree the flipped image is better.

I tend to agree, I remember a Uni lecture about how the human eye scans from center, to top left, to bottom right, then back to center. It's the only reason I can figure as to why it's easier to look at.

As for the curtains, the building is meant to be in the back waters of the Hawkesbury River valley (see below). I just figured that curtains would not be an issue. Will put something in though...maybe cedar Venetians...

Ky Lane · July 25th, 2008

Be nice if those trees were throwing some shadows in the windows.

Nice spot. Im thinking of modelling my ideal eco-home

Thanks for the inspiration.

Tommy L · July 27th, 2008

There are too many rafters which make them look out of scale compared to the (horrible) purple chairs.

StanZ · July 27th, 2008

nice work and great composition - i also like the flipped image better

the reflections off the benchtop are great - guess mental ray can do it as well as any

minor unimportant detail i would consider is the number of drawers - they look pretty small - maybe fewer drawers but bigger

cheers,

Kyle · July 28th, 2008

Too many rafters, too many drawers. I guess less is more. I would also move the chairs and table a little more away from the wall.

Kopeykin · July 28th, 2008

Looks little flat and harsh, there should be more GI. Especially from highligh on the floor.

shaneis · July 28th, 2008

Thanks for your input everyone. OK, rafters and drawers are on their way out, so are the (horrible) chairs. Kopeykin, yes it is lacking GI, I'm trying to see what I can get out of only Final Gather.

It's also the first time I've taken a serious look at the mr_physicalSun/Sky system - always used HDRi previously. At the moment, it's not going as well as I'd like so I guess I'll have to get some photons going to spread the light around. I might see what happens with FG and relfective caustics instead of FG and GI. I'm setting some renders tonight, will post them once they're done.

Thanks again for al the comments,

S.

July 25th, 2008	#2 (permalink)
abhijoy Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Kolkata Posts: 72 Name: Abhijoy Das	Re: Simple Weekkender II Nice work liked the models.

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jameson101 Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Cape Town Age: 20 Posts: 66 Name: James Cuthbert	Re: Simple Weekkender II Looks good, the backround image goes well with your scene. The only thing I can comment on is, your windows dont have curtains. I agree the flipped image is better. __________________ "Of all the things I have lost, I miss my mind the most"

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Ky Lane Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Brisbane, Australia Age: 31 Posts: 912 Name: Ky Lane	Re: Simple Weekkender II Be nice if those trees were throwing some shadows in the windows. Nice spot. Im thinking of modelling my ideal eco-home Thanks for the inspiration.

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Tommy L Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: chicago Age: 30 Posts: 1,913 Name: Tom Livings	Re: Simple Weekkender II There are too many rafters which make them look out of scale compared to the (horrible) purple chairs. __________________ http://thomaslivings.blogspot.com/

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StanZ Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Melbourne Posts: 87 Name: Stan Zaslavsky	Re: Simple Weekkender II nice work and great composition - i also like the flipped image better the reflections off the benchtop are great - guess mental ray can do it as well as any minor unimportant detail i would consider is the number of drawers - they look pretty small - maybe fewer drawers but bigger cheers, __________________ ----------- Stan www.eagleproperty.com.au

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Kyle Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 110 Name: Kyle McBride	Re: Simple Weekkender II Too many rafters, too many drawers. I guess less is more. I would also move the chairs and table a little more away from the wall. __________________ *Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work.*

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Kopeykin Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Moscow Posts: 52 Name: Andrew Kopeykin	Re: Simple Weekkender II Looks little flat and harsh, there should be more GI. Especially from highligh on the floor. __________________ Most charming person in 3d world. Yours, Kopeykin. charming.kopeykin@gmail.com http://www.kopeykin-a.narod.ru/

July 28th, 2008	#10 (permalink)
shaneis Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Sydney Posts: 604 Name: Shane Neal	Re: Simple Weekkender II Thanks for your input everyone. OK, rafters and drawers are on their way out, so are the (horrible) chairs. Kopeykin, yes it is lacking GI, I'm trying to see what I can get out of only Final Gather. It's also the first time I've taken a serious look at the mr_physicalSun/Sky system - always used HDRi previously. At the moment, it's not going as well as I'd like so I guess I'll have to get some photons going to spread the light around. I might see what happens with FG and relfective caustics instead of FG and GI. I'm setting some renders tonight, will post them once they're done. Thanks again for al the comments, S.

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