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Old August 27th, 2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Night Apartment External..um.. Internal...

Have been wroking on an interesting little job (again, with thanks to Justin). Its an apartment looking in from the outside, at night. Been a bit of a challenge getting the lighting to feel right, and added a dropdown lamp as an experiment. Im waiting to hear from the client with a style guide for the furnishings, but thought Id as others opinions while I wait..

Its all Max+MR and no post yet (obviously).
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Looks good Ky,
Its going to look realy beautiful when the furniture inside.Your lighting is good. What are you going to do for the surroundings of the Flat? I know you havent done it yet but it seems like its going to be a challage to get something that wont ruin your image if you know what I mean.
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Nice scene Ky.

What about a background? Unless it's in the middle of the Bush, there should be some sort of lighting outside: city skyline, street light casting a bit of light onto the sides of the flat, the moon, etc.

What rooms are shown in this view?

It's very nice - looking forward to more.
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Client is supplying a night shot for the BG. Will just be city lights.

Rooms are a combines living/ktchen/dining/entertainment.

I did a bit more work that whats there, so it looks somewhat diff - Ill post something Monday - hopefully Ill have the furniture style guide.
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OK, its come a fair way, time to share again

Modelling wise, I have just the kitchen and a daybed/plants for the left hand balcony to go.
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It continues to amaze me how much better a house looks with furniture.

Very nice job, mate!
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It continues to amaze me how much better a house looks with furniture.

Very nice job, mate!
Cheers Joel.

Still polishing everything before rending it out (somehow) to fit a 4m x 12m sign, and the obvious post work.
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Progress report..

Still waiting on some minor details... but we're nearly done
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Perphaps the 3 piece paintings could be desaturated, everything has a nice uniform colour and then youve got some hippy stuff going on there in the middle of the rendering
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Client liked it that saturated... the scene was starting to look a little washed out, which I agreed with. However, Im sourcing new art anyway which is more "feminine".
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