condotel

dwin · September 24th, 2008

helow every one! i just want to share my latest work done in max2009+vray+photoshop, comments en crit are very much welcome, hope u like it! tnx!

nqh.arch · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by dwin

helow every one! i just want to share my latest work done in max2009+vray+photoshop, comments en crit are very much welcome, hope u like it! tnx!

Great! I like it so much but i see your glass is so dark and don't have any area for plant

royalblue · September 24th, 2008

There's so many things that are not good in this image, that it's easier to say what is good....Well, lighting is reasonably good, two of the trees are also good... Everything else is not good...

Kyle · September 24th, 2008

Better sky image and glass reflections will enhance this image considerably.

dwin · September 24th, 2008

tnx to ol guys, all komments are noted, if i have a tym i will update that!tnx again

shaneis · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by dwin

tnx to lo guys, all komments are noted, if i have a tym i will update that!tnx again

U wiL git mo hlp & komNts on yor wrk f ppl cn rED & undRstNd yor p0st. itz a 4m, not a SMS QSO. A cupL of extra key str0ks rly dun tAk aL dA o sAv tym.

WRD!!!!!1!!1!!!11

SandmanNinja · September 24th, 2008

pwnd!

Tommy L · September 25th, 2008

Well I think those guys have been a bit harsh in their comments. I like the image. Its nice and crisp, well modelled for quite an intricate building and the cars, lighting and trees are great. I think the glass needs a little work and the building could maybe benefit from an AO pass. Also, move the front car of to the side a bit. Other than that, I think your client should be happy.
Tom.

dwin · September 25th, 2008

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Originally Posted by Tommy L

Well I think those guys have been a bit harsh in their comments. I like the image. Its nice and crisp, well modelled for quite an intricate building and the cars, lighting and trees are great. I think the glass needs a little work and the building could maybe benefit from an AO pass. Also, move the front car of to the side a bit. Other than that, I think your client should be happy.
Tom.

tnx to all komments sir, en you also sir tommy! tnx for apreciate, yah i agree to your komment, i will improve that. i think i have learn a lot for my mistake en to ol of you guys i try to update this image en i will post again tnx!

baker1444 · September 25th, 2008

I really don't see anything wrong with your images. I think you hit the lighting smack on perfect. It looks like a real photograph. The people in the image are a little bla looking but everyone else has problems with this too, so no big deal. Great job!!

September 24th, 2008	#1 (permalink)
dwin Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: philippines Posts: 57 Name: edwin rabel	condotel helow every one! i just want to share my latest work done in max2009+vray+photoshop, comments en crit are very much welcome, hope u like it! tnx!

September 24th, 2008	#3 (permalink)
royalblue Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Sofia, Bulgaria Posts: 21 Name: Ivo Atanasov	Re: condotel There's so many things that are not good in this image, that it's easier to say what is good....Well, lighting is reasonably good, two of the trees are also good... Everything else is not good...

September 24th, 2008	#4 (permalink)
Kyle Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 111 Name: Kyle McBride	Re: condotel Better sky image and glass reflections will enhance this image considerably. __________________ *Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work.*

September 24th, 2008	#5 (permalink)
dwin Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: philippines Posts: 57 Name: edwin rabel	Re: condotel tnx to ol guys, all komments are noted, if i have a tym i will update that!tnx again Last edited by dwin; September 24th, 2008 at 06:32 PM.

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SandmanNinja Moderator Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Ballarat, Victoria, Australia Posts: 1,375 Name: Joel Callahan	Re: condotel pwnd! __________________ -SandmanNinja website

September 25th, 2008	#8 (permalink)
Tommy L Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: chicago Age: 30 Posts: 1,991 Name: Tom Livings	Re: condotel Well I think those guys have been a bit harsh in their comments. I like the image. Its nice and crisp, well modelled for quite an intricate building and the cars, lighting and trees are great. I think the glass needs a little work and the building could maybe benefit from an AO pass. Also, move the front car of to the side a bit. Other than that, I think your client should be happy. Tom. __________________ http://thomaslivings.blogspot.com/

September 25th, 2008	#10 (permalink)
baker1444 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Newfoundland, Canada Posts: 205 Name: Robert Baker	Re: condotel I really don't see anything wrong with your images. I think you hit the lighting smack on perfect. It looks like a real photograph. The people in the image are a little bla looking but everyone else has problems with this too, so no big deal. Great job!! __________________ "Its so easy to be critical"

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