natural kitchen

dwin · September 24th, 2008

gud day to ol of u! its me again, another latest work project, done in max+vray+ps, as usual comments en crit are much welcome!tnx.view1:

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MrCAD · September 24th, 2008

Wow..thats amazingly detailed...and excellent render..beautifully modeled and rendered..great work

Meher

dwin · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by MrCAD

Wow..thats amazingly detailed...and excellent render..beautifully modeled and rendered..great work

Meher

tnx for apreciate bro! im still practising right now if how to achieve a realistic render.tnx again!

mattclinch · September 24th, 2008

i see a lot of evermotion, which gives the game away immediately, and the layout of the kitchen in general seems strange. you also have a worktop texture that is tiling quite a bit.
i'm curious as to how you've lit it - the sun comes through the windows we are looking at (albeit fairly weakly) and yet most of the light seems to come from behind.
the exterior photo needs to be far more overexposed to suit the exposure level.
i also think the compositions and crops are fairly awkward.

adricorrea · September 24th, 2008

I think overall they are very good picture, and I can see you definitively put a lot of detail, which sometimes can lead to make little mistakes.

The forst thing that i noticed is perphaps you need a touch of reflection in the material for the kithen units, and the picture outside needs to be overexpoused.

dwin · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by mattclinch

i see a lot of evermotion, which gives the game away immediately, and the layout of the kitchen in general seems strange. you also have a worktop texture that is tiling quite a bit.
i'm curious as to how you've lit it - the sun comes through the windows we are looking at (albeit fairly weakly) and yet most of the light seems to come from behind.
the exterior photo needs to be far more overexposed to suit the exposure level.
i also think the compositions and crops are fairly awkward.

tnx for comment sir! yah you right sir! most of them are made of evermotion,some of your comments sir i agree with that, until now i will practising the settings of vray,so next tym i will apply all your comments en crits. tnx again bro i realy apreciate that!

dwin · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by adricorrea

I think overall they are very good picture, and I can see you definitively put a lot of detail, which sometimes can lead to make little mistakes.

The forst thing that i noticed is perphaps you need a touch of reflection in the material for the kithen units, and the picture outside needs to be overexpoused.

tnx for comment en apreciate sir!nextym i will do that en apply all your comments tnx again bro!

chadw · September 24th, 2008

I am in total agreement with Matt. I think you need to add some detail to your windows as well as other non purchased content..... the modeling leaves a lot to be desired next to all of the evermotion content. Lighting needs a lot of work. And textures need a bit more consideration. In all I think this is a nice start, however I would turn off all of the appliances and cookware and look at the scene "naked" so you might focus on lighting and texturing. Best of luck.

dra3 · September 24th, 2008

dood thats amazing work,,,what are your comp specs...

dwin · September 24th, 2008

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Originally Posted by dra3

dood thats amazing work,,,what are your comp specs...

tnx bro for droping by! quad core 2.4 ghz p5kpro, 3gb of ram, 1gb nividia 8500gt 320gb hardisk heres my speks of the comp.bro!tnx again

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dwin Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: philippines Posts: 57 Name: edwin rabel	natural kitchen gud day to ol of u! its me again, another latest work project, done in max+vray+ps, as usual comments en crit are much welcome!tnx.view1: ,view 2

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MrCAD Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: India Posts: 184 Name: Meher Thakker	Re: natural kitchen Wow..thats amazingly detailed...and excellent render..beautifully modeled and rendered..great work Meher __________________ Home Office Furniture 3D 3D NEWs

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mattclinch Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: W. London Age: 25 Posts: 321 Name: Matt Clinch	Re: natural kitchen i see a lot of evermotion, which gives the game away immediately, and the layout of the kitchen in general seems strange. you also have a worktop texture that is tiling quite a bit. i'm curious as to how you've lit it - the sun comes through the windows we are looking at (albeit fairly weakly) and yet most of the light seems to come from behind. the exterior photo needs to be far more overexposed to suit the exposure level. i also think the compositions and crops are fairly awkward. __________________ Matt Clinch Arch Viz Artist @ Hayes Davidson http://www.hayesdavidson.com

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adricorrea Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Poole Age: 30 Posts: 65 Name: Adriana Correa	Re: natural kitchen I think overall they are very good picture, and I can see you definitively put a lot of detail, which sometimes can lead to make little mistakes. The forst thing that i noticed is perphaps you need a touch of reflection in the material for the kithen units, and the picture outside needs to be overexpoused.

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chadw Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Hampshire Posts: 39 Name: Chad Wanstreet	Re: natural kitchen I am in total agreement with Matt. I think you need to add some detail to your windows as well as other non purchased content..... the modeling leaves a lot to be desired next to all of the evermotion content. Lighting needs a lot of work. And textures need a bit more consideration. In all I think this is a nice start, however I would turn off all of the appliances and cookware and look at the scene "naked" so you might focus on lighting and texturing. Best of luck.

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dra3 Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Manhattan, New York Age: 27 Posts: 141 Name: Aldrin Cruz	Re: natural kitchen dood thats amazing work,,,what are your comp specs... __________________ Inspiration is what drives me most,,,

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