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Old October 14th, 2008   #11 (permalink)
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Default Re: 99 units

id do the background white, clean sharp line, no fades/gradients falloffs - they belong in 1990 imo.
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Nicnic, funnily I had it this way, nice and clean, very easy to see the property boundrys, but then I had a change of thought and decided to soften it with the gradient.

After a major computer crash, I have lost the file. Luckily only the camera view and the ground plane texture work. Thank goodness for Xref's.

Got a bit of a rush on so I will only be updating next week. Sooner if I'm lucky.

Thanks all for the comments, keep them coming

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Looks nice to me.
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What you could do Justin is what I call 'The Chinese Way' (without offending anyone). Get some high res aerial photos and just get them in your image to make a believable surrounding, without paying attention to the actual site.
With some more care, you could perphaps match as closely as you can to the site the buildings are at, take reference from google. Of course best to keep perspective matched

Now a little explanation why I call it what I call it:
A while back, I was making an image for a client, and I got images that a Chinese vis company did. When I compared the site to the aerial shots, not a thing matched with the actual surroundings.
Of course Im not saying everyone Chinese company does it this way
(but I do remember someone here, that described how the Chinese lookalike workflow goes, namely taking loads of random pictures for backdrops and using each only once, so there is definetaly some connection here )
If it will pass or not only depends on how picky the client is with his surroundings.
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I know the method your talking of, and a very apt description.

Just had a meeting with the client and they want to go the clean edge with white backround. "Keep it simple" was his remark

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Make sure to post an update when you are finished.
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Hey Justin, I only have one crit on the image posted..
- it feels like an overcast day

maybe longer shadows and brighter shadows will help
also some brighter green.

and maybe, just maybe, give the most brightest parts a bit of glow in post. I think as its not a photo inc base you can put a bit of punch into it.

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you need an aerial shot just go up the tower of terror!
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As promised here is an update. Set it off to the client. He said, "Great, send the invoice". So I guess its done.
Thanks for the comments everyone

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wow - great words to hear!

It looks great - congrats
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