waiting room

shakey3d · March 14th, 2004

here is another render i'm working on, i guess the white areas in the picture in
the window got a little burned out, i'll try to fix that. any c&c welcome.

maranello55 · March 14th, 2004

Hey Shakey3d!

As I can see youre not 'shakey' at all! Its a nice image. I think exposure is natural (at least in nature), an image IMO needs these natural effects (to be realistic). Keep it up!

giraffe · March 14th, 2004

it is a nice image

I like the lighting but it seems to me there is something unusual with the shadows and the curtains look too hard to me

STRAT · March 15th, 2004

i agree with giraffe - there's strange translucency going on in the drapes. also, the external environment is messing up at the edges. theres repartition in the floor matt too.

ciberarte · March 15th, 2004

Nice image
The Carpet´s tiling makes squares all over the floor.

bigcahunak · March 16th, 2004

Ahlan Itay.
Image looks nice.
Perhaps with such a strong light from the outside, the shaded areas need to be a little more lit. You ca try increasing the dark multi and/or the indirect multi.
Regardless, rendering time looks too high, so I guess it still needs some tweaking.

shakey3d · March 16th, 2004

thanks for the comments everyone, here is another render, i've improved rendering time from 4:30h to 1:17h, so thats good news, but i still have a problem with the image in the window..once i render with the drapes it burns out the picture in the edges, i dont know how to fix that. and theres still repartition in the floor because i'm using a jpg for the floor. maybe i'll change that image.

shakey3d · March 17th, 2004

another version, render time is too high for some reason, tell me what you think.

maranello55 · March 17th, 2004

Yo shakey,

I think its the lights that has to go thru the glass on ur window and the carpet made the render longer.

Its a nice render.....now with everything seems to be perfect, u can finally do ur curtains!! : )

shakey3d · March 18th, 2004

some more tweaking done, i think its better now..

March 14th, 2004	#2 (permalink)
maranello55 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Age: 30 Posts: 22 Name: Nazirull Safry Paijo	Re: waiting room Hey Shakey3d! As I can see youre not 'shakey' at all! Its a nice image. I think exposure is natural (at least in nature), an image IMO needs these natural effects (to be realistic). Keep it up!

March 14th, 2004	#3 (permalink)
giraffe Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: smallville ;) Posts: 184 Name: elif serencio	Re: waiting room it is a nice image I like the lighting but it seems to me there is something unusual with the shadows and the curtains look too hard to me

March 15th, 2004	#4 (permalink)
STRAT Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK. Age: 36 Posts: 6,486 Name: Stephen Leworthy	Re: waiting room i agree with giraffe - there's strange translucency going on in the drapes. also, the external environment is messing up at the edges. theres repartition in the floor matt too.

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ciberarte Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Vancouver, Canada Age: 32 Posts: 28 Name: Arnaldo Rodríguez	Re: waiting room Nice image The Carpet´s tiling makes squares all over the floor. __________________ www.arnaldorodriguez.com english in progress français en procès

March 16th, 2004	#6 (permalink)
bigcahunak Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Israel Age: 36 Posts: 820 Name: Itzik Kelner	Re: waiting room Ahlan Itay. Image looks nice. Perhaps with such a strong light from the outside, the shaded areas need to be a little more lit. You ca try increasing the dark multi and/or the indirect multi. Regardless, rendering time looks too high, so I guess it still needs some tweaking.

March 16th, 2004	#7 (permalink)
shakey3d Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: israel Posts: 29 Name: Itay Greenberg	Re: waiting room thanks for the comments everyone, here is another render, i've improved rendering time from 4:30h to 1:17h, so thats good news, but i still have a problem with the image in the window..once i render with the drapes it burns out the picture in the edges, i dont know how to fix that. and theres still repartition in the floor because i'm using a jpg for the floor. maybe i'll change that image. __________________ http://shakey3d.parser.co.il Last edited by shakey3d; March 18th, 2004 at 02:39 AM.

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maranello55 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Age: 30 Posts: 22 Name: Nazirull Safry Paijo	Re: waiting room Yo shakey, I think its the lights that has to go thru the glass on ur window and the carpet made the render longer. Its a nice render.....now with everything seems to be perfect, u can finally do ur curtains!! : )

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