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Old June 13th, 2005   #2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden
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Default Re: Olivier Campagne - Final

Near perfection. Great, now I have to find some flaws.

With so many great textures shown, I think the ceiling feels too smooth. While the lighting is amazing, why is the left post so much more light than its brothers? I guess there could be a window just to our left. I suppose I could zoom into the reflection on the garbage can to find out.

The ceiling lamps want to be on. They told me. Even if they cannot match the exterior light, they see how nicely it comes in and want to play. Turn them on. The lights hanging by the far windows are already having a party.

The floor tile pattern is wonderful. There seems to be a few secondary lines in the pattern, which distracts a bit. The railing on the stairs starts a little high, I think.

But the woman and the cat--brilliant!
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