Re: Olivier Campagne - Final
Really a beautiful image – with deft handling of the light materials etc…I definitely feel a sense of this place in this piece like a Florida hotel lobby after a hurricane, or one that has seen better days.
My one comment would be that the sense of desolation and loneliness could be further pushed by making the woman/cat grouping feel like it was even more of an island than you already have indicated through the area rug. Making the floor directly behind the center chairs (the area around the furthest column and people) a little brighter than the chairs themselves would graphically give you a little more depth and further isolate the social grouping. I might also suggest getting some of the pink color from the wall into her dress to get our eyes moving between the two and hold down the edges of the canvas better.
But those are small potatoes. Nice Job.
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