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Old November 4th, 2004   #1 (permalink)
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Hi everybody ,
I'm posting an image of a hotel reception please tell me your critiques .
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Looks flat and graphic, it is hard to tell what is going on. You may need to do two or three views to show off the space better.

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Yeah, I agree, I'd like to see the perspective changed a bit either off to the left or right a touch.

I do like the colors, for example, down the hallway looking at the green wall, and the red up closer. I like that. Add's nice life and warmth to the image
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The changes listed above are a good start.. The light is illuminating from the wrong side of the cans on the ceiling. How do you have them lit?
Another thing.... What are those black horizontal lines running across your image? Is that some sort of partition? If so, I would add some more detail to them. It looks like they are floating, and I would not make them as reflected on the ceiling, if that's what it is.
The potted plant in the left corner is nice. The ones going back the (hallway which looks great) need work. Hmmm... That's what it is about the floor. I just noticed that there are two levels with a step. I had to look at the wall to realize it. Maybe you could work on the flooring a little..

It's looking good so far... Looking forward to the update..
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i think we don't need be always photorealistic, i like the style of the picture, i think the colours are a little saturated, but i think it's a good pic...
I don't like the chairs, looks out of place..
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thank you all for your comments . yeah , i need it to be graphic not realistic. i agree with you about the chairs ,the step and the cieling light.

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