Office Building

otacon · February 12th, 2005

This is a render i did based off a building i live near. Just a personal project. Lightwave 7.5. Comments welcome.

4DM · February 12th, 2005

Looks very good from what I can see - good contrast and the glass works well.

But it leaves me wanting to see a bit more though, in spite of the fact that your composition is very effective for this type of shot.

Arch viz. often sinks or swims on the quality of the entourage around the building - and the building itself can sometimes be the easiest part.

How it meets the ground, and how you make the surroundings convincing, is quite a test of achievement.

If you can maintain this quality in that aspect, then you're doing well.

D.

otacon · February 12th, 2005

Your right. And in my opinion the surrondings are the hardest part. I am workin now on the rest of the building and area. Hopefully i can keep the same quality...we will see.

donix · February 12th, 2005

nice image dude. good choice on the angle also.

i think much better if you lessen the opacity on your glass to 70-90%, a little visibility on the inside coz this one is a close up.

how about try a night shot on this one?

otacon · February 13th, 2005

Thanks. I might try a night shot, would be cool....keep the same angle to compare the two. Maybe have some of the offices with lights on.

Elliot · February 13th, 2005

Jason,

Your images are very good....! I am impressed. What modeling software did you use?

Great Stuff Congratulations!
Elliot

Dibbers · February 13th, 2005

I don't think therte is enough height or interest in this building to warrent a viewpoint like this. I agree with 4DM...the other things could turn it into a better image.

otacon · February 13th, 2005

I use lightwave 3d for modeling and rendering.

alexyork · February 13th, 2005

hello m8

nice to see you on here.

you're an unstoppable force... you crank out top-quality renders like it's going out of fashion! you'll put us all out of work!

crazy homeless guy · February 13th, 2005

nice image. nice gallery as well. the only part that bothers me is the noise and compression of the background sky. the building is smooth and nice, but the background image is not of the same quality imo.

also, i agree with the comments about being able to see into the building slightly. mainly through the windows on the left hand side of the image. something about the reflection bothers me. i am not quite sure how it would respond under the conditions present (shade/shadow/angle), but it seems a little off.

February 12th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
4DM Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: London, UK Posts: 198 Name: Danny Meyer	Re: Office Building Looks very good from what I can see - good contrast and the glass works well. But it leaves me wanting to see a bit more though, in spite of the fact that your composition is very effective for this type of shot. Arch viz. often sinks or swims on the quality of the entourage around the building - and the building itself can sometimes be the easiest part. How it meets the ground, and how you make the surroundings convincing, is quite a test of achievement. If you can maintain this quality in that aspect, then you're doing well. D.

February 12th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
otacon Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: memphis Age: 23 Posts: 332 Name: Jason Lee	Re: Office Building Your right. And in my opinion the surrondings are the hardest part. I am workin now on the rest of the building and area. Hopefully i can keep the same quality...we will see. __________________ My gallery Paradigm Productions

February 12th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
donix Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: UAE Age: 32 Posts: 156 Name: Don Derrick Hatamosa	Re: Office Building nice image dude. good choice on the angle also. i think much better if you lessen the opacity on your glass to 70-90%, a little visibility on the inside coz this one is a close up. how about try a night shot on this one?

February 13th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
otacon Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: memphis Age: 23 Posts: 332 Name: Jason Lee	Re: Office Building Thanks. I might try a night shot, would be cool....keep the same angle to compare the two. Maybe have some of the offices with lights on. __________________ My gallery Paradigm Productions

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Elliot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Atlanta, Georgia Posts: 459 Name: Elliot Correa	Re: Office Building Jason, Your images are very good....! I am impressed. What modeling software did you use? Great Stuff Congratulations! Elliot __________________ Elliot

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Dibbers Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Leeds. UK Posts: 1,011 Name: Iain Denby	Re: Office Building I don't think therte is enough height or interest in this building to warrent a viewpoint like this. I agree with 4DM...the other things could turn it into a better image. __________________ Hard boiled eggs and nuts....Mm! www.idenby.co.uk

February 13th, 2005	#8 (permalink)
otacon Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: memphis Age: 23 Posts: 332 Name: Jason Lee	Re: Office Building I use lightwave 3d for modeling and rendering. __________________ My gallery Paradigm Productions

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alexyork Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: UK, London, Teesside Age: 24 Posts: 92 Name: Alex York	Re: Office Building hello m8 nice to see you on here. you're an unstoppable force... you crank out top-quality renders like it's going out of fashion! you'll put us all out of work!

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crazy homeless guy Moderator Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: San Francisco Posts: 2,913 Name: travis schmiesing	Re: Office Building nice image. nice gallery as well. the only part that bothers me is the noise and compression of the background sky. the building is smooth and nice, but the background image is not of the same quality imo. also, i agree with the comments about being able to see into the building slightly. mainly through the windows on the left hand side of the image. something about the reflection bothers me. i am not quite sure how it would respond under the conditions present (shade/shadow/angle), but it seems a little off.

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