Martin Pettigrew - WIP

marpetti · March 11th, 2005

Here is my work in progress. The main idea is a happy escape surrounded by a lifeless city.
There are a few shapes missing right now but they will be added soon.
There will be also more work on composition and proportions.

I'll be waiting for your comments and critiques.

Martin

oliviercampagne · March 12th, 2005

Hey Martin,
I think that's a really nice start.. pretty simple idea...
Also i am sure you going to make these buildings blocks as "sad" as they should be... maybe you can use only the environment to lighten the scene to make the set even more dramatic...instead of using this direct sun with sharp shadows...
good work and good luck
Olivier

metaball · March 17th, 2005

Hey Martin, nice moody shot you have. You may want to assemble your object of focus to epitomise on this mood.

marpetti · March 17th, 2005

Hi everyone,
Here is an updated image. I focused on the creation of the place. The building of this lifeless city are changing and it is expressed by colors and shapes that come from the centre place (that I still call a happy escape :-). Still some work to do (composition of the place, details), but the pov and the look should be the same (no textures, color contrast).

Brian Cassil · March 17th, 2005

When I looked at your original post I have to admit I wasn't too keen on it but the adjustments you've made are starting to look really good. Pulling the camera back helped a lot.

Newke · March 17th, 2005

Yes, that's a lot better !

oliviercampagne · March 17th, 2005

really nice !!! ... also the style is fitting to the design...
for the middle square why not putting the Buren columns ... just an idea..i though about it when i saw this public space..

March 12th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
oliviercampagne Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: paris Age: 32 Posts: 162 Name: Olivier Campagne	Re: Martin Pettigrew - WIP Hey Martin, I think that's a really nice start.. pretty simple idea... Also i am sure you going to make these buildings blocks as "sad" as they should be... maybe you can use only the environment to lighten the scene to make the set even more dramatic...instead of using this direct sun with sharp shadows... good work and good luck Olivier

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metaball Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Singapore Age: 35 Posts: 28 Name: Kum Fei Wong	Re: Martin Pettigrew - WIP Hey Martin, nice moody shot you have. You may want to assemble your object of focus to epitomise on this mood.

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Brian Cassil Moderator Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Salt Lake City, Ut. Age: 36 Posts: 2,014 Name: Brian Cassil	Re: Martin Pettigrew - WIP When I looked at your original post I have to admit I wasn't too keen on it but the adjustments you've made are starting to look really good. Pulling the camera back helped a lot.

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Newke Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: clermont-ferrand Age: 35 Posts: 95 Name: Nicolas Richelet	Re: Martin Pettigrew - WIP Yes, that's a lot better ! __________________ www.infographiestudio.com www.atelier4.fr

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