Cesar Verastegui FINAL

cesario76 · March 20th, 2005

I have to leave the city `cause there are cops after me.

Just kidding.I must be out of the city with my family, so i will not be able to do changes to the image

Good luck to everyone...

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

While there are no obvious problems here, there is a general lack of inspiration. Is this a shrine to a pokey thing?

The saturation of the foreground colors is good, but the background is too pale. Does the hanging square 'frame' the view? If so, it should actually frame the view. The tone of the floor is so close to the wall its hard to tell that you've changed materials.

I could write more, but it's Easter, so I must be off for a dinner with my family.

Judging complete (for now).

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Scale is a little off.

Lon · March 29th, 2005

I’m not entirely sure what I’m looking at, but it’s a little banal. The textures, GI, slight reflections are all a good start, I just think the fit lacks the element that gives the viewer the desire to visit. It’s not a major thing, but we have clear sunny day in the foreground with crisp shadows, and an overcast and foggy day in the background?

honzal · March 29th, 2005

The image is banal ( I have to repeat it ). Even if a first look seems interesting, the second one is not really pleasant.
Background picture is very unapropriete in terms of lighting condition and also it brokes the perspektive of the image.

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

Far too primitive and weird. This is an example where one could learn a lot more from looking at photography and other art references instead of working in a vacuum. The cantilevered concrete beams (notice the shadows on the floor) gives away a stage set-like approach.

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Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: Cesar Verastegui FINAL While there are no obvious problems here, there is a general lack of inspiration. Is this a shrine to a pokey thing? The saturation of the foreground colors is good, but the background is too pale. Does the hanging square 'frame' the view? If so, it should actually frame the view. The tone of the floor is so close to the wall its hard to tell that you've changed materials. I could write more, but it's Easter, so I must be off for a dinner with my family. Judging complete (for now). __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

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hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: Cesar Verastegui FINAL Scale is a little off.

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Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: Cesar Verastegui FINAL I’m not entirely sure what I’m looking at, but it’s a little banal. The textures, GI, slight reflections are all a good start, I just think the fit lacks the element that gives the viewer the desire to visit. It’s not a major thing, but we have clear sunny day in the foreground with crisp shadows, and an overcast and foggy day in the background?

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honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: Cesar Verastegui FINAL The image is banal ( I have to repeat it ). Even if a first look seems interesting, the second one is not really pleasant. Background picture is very unapropriete in terms of lighting condition and also it brokes the perspektive of the image. Jan

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matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: Cesar Verastegui FINAL Far too primitive and weird. This is an example where one could learn a lot more from looking at photography and other art references instead of working in a vacuum. The cantilevered concrete beams (notice the shadows on the floor) gives away a stage set-like approach.

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