John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL

voltaire_ira · March 21st, 2005

Here's my FINAL image. Congratulations to everyone!

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

You have used the shapes realy well. The picture doesn't look like you were forces into the shapes.

Its a good mix of the pedestrian view and the towering towers view. That's hard, but you've got it. Lighting the corners of the towers is a great visual. But I find the interior stuff too simplistic. The rooms are either on or off, no variation. The same is true for the background--to harsh and without and hint of distance like fog or lower contrast.

I would prefer to see to above the second tower and a little less foreground. I don't know what the glowing arch in the middle plaza is, and it weights the picture to the right. It should be on the left side for balance. Or not ther at all. It stops the eye and makes you ponder what it is.

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Lighting looks a little force. The dramatic image is being created through the perspetival lens

Lon · March 29th, 2005

This one pops off the page. The lighting inside the windows needs some more thought and detail. I’d like to see this with a fish eye lens.

honzal · March 29th, 2005

Overbright parts really destroy the rest. Compostion is not carefully tuned and perspective is a bit odd to me.
Light doesn't work ( main tower are too brihgt to not lit the surrounding buildings at least a bit ).

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

The crop is really pinched at the top. It seems to have layered color zones which don't relate to each other. Too cartoon-y and has no sense of scale.

March 27th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL You have used the shapes realy well. The picture doesn't look like you were forces into the shapes. Its a good mix of the pedestrian view and the towering towers view. That's hard, but you've got it. Lighting the corners of the towers is a great visual. But I find the interior stuff too simplistic. The rooms are either on or off, no variation. The same is true for the background--to harsh and without and hint of distance like fog or lower contrast. I would prefer to see to above the second tower and a little less foreground. I don't know what the glowing arch in the middle plaza is, and it weights the picture to the right. It should be on the left side for balance. Or not ther at all. It stops the eye and makes you ponder what it is. __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

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hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL Lighting looks a little force. The dramatic image is being created through the perspetival lens

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Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL This one pops off the page. The lighting inside the windows needs some more thought and detail. I’d like to see this with a fish eye lens.

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honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL Overbright parts really destroy the rest. Compostion is not carefully tuned and perspective is a bit odd to me. Light doesn't work ( main tower are too brihgt to not lit the surrounding buildings at least a bit ). Jan

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matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - FINAL The crop is really pinched at the top. It seems to have layered color zones which don't relate to each other. Too cartoon-y and has no sense of scale.

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