Tyrone Marshall - FINAL

Continuumx · March 21st, 2005

In this space, the elementals of light, form and place intertwine to create a suggestion of an architectural space.

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

We are judging the finals, and not the WIP. But your mid-term WIP, the one with all the white lines was inspired, so architectural. This one's nice, too.

The blur works, but I wonder what the point of it is? Do the shapes need obscuring? I think you show their glow and mult-level lighting just fine without the glow and blur.

The choice of viewpoint is a good one. It is symetrical (which I often don't like) but being so shows just how asymetrical the design is while still being axial.

What's that raised piece doing in the road, just ahead? That's a hint that you don't want to enter the space, which I actually do.

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Very elegant! Great use of volumes and light.

Lon · March 29th, 2005

The design is excellent, but the blur is a little heavy-handed. My only wish is that instead of seeing through to black, I was seeing something of interest. The lighting and composition (other than the view through) are excellent.

honzal · March 29th, 2005

It seems as WIP with try of blur and glow trick to finish it quickly.

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

Too much blur for blur's sake. One doesn't sense an environment or a horizon line at all.

March 27th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: Tyrone Marshall - FINAL We are judging the finals, and not the WIP. But your mid-term WIP, the one with all the white lines was inspired, so architectural. This one's nice, too. The blur works, but I wonder what the point of it is? Do the shapes need obscuring? I think you show their glow and mult-level lighting just fine without the glow and blur. The choice of viewpoint is a good one. It is symetrical (which I often don't like) but being so shows just how asymetrical the design is while still being axial. What's that raised piece doing in the road, just ahead? That's a hint that you don't want to enter the space, which I actually do. __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

March 28th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: Tyrone Marshall - FINAL Very elegant! Great use of volumes and light.

March 29th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: Tyrone Marshall - FINAL The design is excellent, but the blur is a little heavy-handed. My only wish is that instead of seeing through to black, I was seeing something of interest. The lighting and composition (other than the view through) are excellent.

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honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: Tyrone Marshall - FINAL It seems as WIP with try of blur and glow trick to finish it quickly. Jan Last edited by honzal; March 29th, 2005 at 03:47 PM.

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matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: Tyrone Marshall - FINAL Too much blur for blur's sake. One doesn't sense an environment or a horizon line at all.

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