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Ernest Burden

There's a lot to like with this entry.

The floor texture is perfect, though the wall on the left looks too shiny-plasticy. While textures were not a direct requirement, including them becomes part of the piece for better or worse.

The balace of glow from the skylight, cubes, and especially distant space is really pleasing. My big problem here is the light streaming down the wall on the left--its going great, then cuts off in the foreground. I want more of the light, want to see more of the shape of the skylight in the shadow. The trench is a little bright, isn't it? Brighter than sunlight?

Composition is perfect. The whole thing tells the story of a space that you move through, with a sense of meter, direction and things to appreciate along the way.

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hbetter

Competent image.

Lon

The use of light and shadow is excellent. The floor looks convincing, but the wall to the left isn’t. The composition is excellent, and I like that the scale figures are in there but in the distance.

honzal

Light is really nice, I am not just sure about the sun light which dosn't seem to be a sun light (look like a big spot to me).
Overall color balance and materials are perfect. The left wall look plastic a bit, though. The left light canal is too bright and light on the bench is wrong.

Other than these small things it works perfect.

Jan

matthewbannister

A strong visual with a daring sense of contrast. It's gone a little dark in places. Composition, texture, and mood are all good though. The monochromatic color is saved by the hint of blue in the skylight. If it didn't have that blue, it would seem very sepia.