Wang weihua -Final

onlyblood · March 22nd, 2005

It's take me 30 hours to repair my computer.
Thanks for Gods,The scense is Ok.
The render is just finished on time.

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

I find this enrty a little too plain and straightforward. It is well done, but doesn not seem to take many chances. There is no part that is not well done, although the water texture is too saturated and the 'waves' too big for where the water is.

Its a nice space, but the glass doesn't invite you in. The sculpture is very surface-oriented in a very surface-plain space. Maybe that helps with balance, I not for me.

The stairs we see do a good job of leading us up onto the second level. The lighting shows the forms very well. I begin to wonder what's to the right. A pan to the right might be good, it would make the pool more the center of attention.

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Looks quite average. Seems like Wang is trying to design a building as opposed to a rendering. The creativity for the image suffered.

Lon · March 29th, 2005

I can’t get past the water – it just looks too strange. I think it would have been more successful to make the focus of the scene the sculpture and then let everything else become the backplate for it. The sun is out, but the sky looks as though it’s about to rain. It makes it a little dreary.

honzal · March 29th, 2005

Looks like a very poor game design in a good engine.
At least camera could be more interesting, but it isn't.

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

This one seems too predictable, not sure what's being pushed. Texture scales seem strange. What is making the water move so much? It seems the reflecting pool could've been the generator of this image. Where are the reflections?

March 27th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: Wang weihua -Final I find this enrty a little too plain and straightforward. It is well done, but doesn not seem to take many chances. There is no part that is not well done, although the water texture is too saturated and the 'waves' too big for where the water is. Its a nice space, but the glass doesn't invite you in. The sculpture is very surface-oriented in a very surface-plain space. Maybe that helps with balance, I not for me. The stairs we see do a good job of leading us up onto the second level. The lighting shows the forms very well. I begin to wonder what's to the right. A pan to the right might be good, it would make the pool more the center of attention. __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

March 28th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: Wang weihua -Final Looks quite average. Seems like Wang is trying to design a building as opposed to a rendering. The creativity for the image suffered.

March 29th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: Wang weihua -Final I can’t get past the water – it just looks too strange. I think it would have been more successful to make the focus of the scene the sculpture and then let everything else become the backplate for it. The sun is out, but the sky looks as though it’s about to rain. It makes it a little dreary.

March 29th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: Wang weihua -Final Looks like a very poor game design in a good engine. At least camera could be more interesting, but it isn't. Jan

March 31st, 2005	#6 (permalink)
matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: Wang weihua -Final This one seems too predictable, not sure what's being pushed. Texture scales seem strange. What is making the water move so much? It seems the reflecting pool could've been the generator of this image. Where are the reflections?

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