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Ernest Burden

Invasion of Alien Shipping Containers From a Very Muddy Planet.

Great coloration, great movement within the picture. The tower effectively stops the invasion. But the brightness of the reflection on the tower sems a bit too much. It's not warm yellow like the rest.

The invaders are less complex, surface-wise, than the terestrial builings. Perhaps they could be even MORE smooth and platonic to make that point of 'different'.

You have the strong perspective line 'in' and a good secondary one left-to-right in the buildings, but I would like to see another secondary one in the sky, maybe clouds or other vehicles in the background, doing the left-to-right for balance. But subtle.

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Ernest Burden III
AcmeDigital
architectural rendering

hbetter

Pawel’s imaginative floating objects is heading towards a spirit of place. What I find distracting is the blinding light on the rear and the contradictory city fabric below. It is either sci-fi or traditional building, not convincing as both.

Lon

I like the city model and the bright sunlight on the city building. I’m a little less convinced of the specular reflection on the hero building. It’s a little overpowering, and it makes it seem as though the ships are being attracted to it like a bug light. The textures are nice, and the sky fits well, I just keep wishing that this were a 2pt. perspective.

honzal

very convincing light (except the specular on the skyscraper) and I have to agree with Lon - 2pt perspective please

Nice composition into the background photo.

Jan

matthewbannister

I like this one. Good use of perspective draws one's eye across the scene. The monochromatic nature doesn't bother me, as it seems to suggest a certain mood or time of day. The overall image has good tonal value from lights to mids to darks. Good overall integration.