Luis Rivero -Final

infarq · March 22nd, 2005

mmmmm

Ernest Burden · March 27th, 2005

I'm going to have to take the work of some of the entrants that you used all the shapes. Here most of all.

The composition is good, with a major sideways axis but a light/dark axis that pulls in down the center.

The blurring of the foreground railings gives a 'scale model' look that bothers me a bit. Also--where does the greenish light come from? Why is it colored? There is nothing to offset the coloration, too.

This piece raises more questions than it answers, which was probably the point.

hbetter · March 28th, 2005

Luis could of used more creative use of lighting to create depth in space. The rendered space reads flat.

Lon · March 29th, 2005

I’m going to take your word for it that all the shapes are here. I like the simplicity and the lighting. The DOF reminds me of the photos I took of my architectural models in college without a good lens. It makes the scale seem like this is tiny on a table somwhere. The colors and textures are nice, but I’m reading this composition as a background waiting for its hero character.

honzal · March 29th, 2005

Like the compostion a lot and agree with Lon that some Alien should be the front plane and then the image will be complete.

Don't understand where the green light comes from.

Jan

matthewbannister · March 31st, 2005

It's too monochromatic. THe blur effects give it a strange sense of scale. It seems more like a physical model that's been photograph rather than a computer environment or photographable real space. There's a nice graphic quality though.

March 27th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Ernest Burden Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Ossining, NY USA Posts: 4,999 Name: Ernest Burden III	Re: Luis Rivero -Final I'm going to have to take the work of some of the entrants that you used all the shapes. Here most of all. The composition is good, with a major sideways axis but a light/dark axis that pulls in down the center. The blurring of the foreground railings gives a 'scale model' look that bothers me a bit. Also--where does the greenish light come from? Why is it colored? There is nothing to offset the coloration, too. This piece raises more questions than it answers, which was probably the point. __________________ Ernest Burden III AcmeDigital architectural rendering

March 28th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
hbetter Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Boston Posts: 68 Name: Hansy Better	Re: Luis Rivero -Final Luis could of used more creative use of lighting to create depth in space. The rendered space reads flat.

March 29th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
Lon Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 64 Name: Lon Grohs	Re: Luis Rivero -Final I’m going to take your word for it that all the shapes are here. I like the simplicity and the lighting. The DOF reminds me of the photos I took of my architectural models in college without a good lens. It makes the scale seem like this is tiny on a table somwhere. The colors and textures are nice, but I’m reading this composition as a background waiting for its hero character.

March 29th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
honzal Member Join Date: May 2002 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 49 Name: Jan Rybar	Re: Luis Rivero -Final Like the compostion a lot and agree with Lon that some Alien should be the front plane and then the image will be complete. Don't understand where the green light comes from. Jan

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matthewbannister Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: new york Age: 41 Posts: 68 Name: dbox matthew bannister	Re: Luis Rivero -Final It's too monochromatic. THe blur effects give it a strange sense of scale. It seems more like a physical model that's been photograph rather than a computer environment or photographable real space. There's a nice graphic quality though.

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