John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2

voltaire_ira · April 26th, 2005

Hello everyone,

Here's my WIP at last. I just started and still have lot's of things to do.
I hope I can still make ut to the deadline..sheesh, been a very busy month!
anyways, same during the college archi years...sleepless nights and coffee plus cramming!

...inspired while i was walking along Ortigas avenue here in the Philippines.

voltaire_ira · April 26th, 2005

here's an update...have to work fast...

Martin Day · April 26th, 2005

Hi,

In my opinion the first WIP has much more impact. I mean the light and reflections in wet ground.
Don't turn back from that idea.

Good luck
Martin

voltaire_ira · April 26th, 2005

here's my almost final wip...

jucaro · April 26th, 2005

Remove that testarossa. Its taking the attention away from the buildings and the streets. (cue: Enter Don Jonson)

I thought your first wip was supposed to be a rush hour on a rainy late afternoon.

Da_RoCk · April 26th, 2005

Ta,

LOL, miami vice... btw, Try to check on the street lamp (left side). It has no lamp head... I agree with martin... the first WIP has more voltaire-ish feel into it. The last one seems to be on a bright sunny day but it seems your sky doesnt say so. Try to post-process it more.

Richard McCarthy · April 26th, 2005

Hey John!
I think you need to tone down that light bloom effect too.
It makes the whole scene lacking in contrast and pretty unrealistic.
And I agree with others, the car in foreground is the focus of the image, it sort of makes it a "car showcase render" than a "Urban viz", you probably need to remove it, or put it towards the back of the image. Also the RPC people seems to be quite out of place (constrast issue again) with the rest of the scene, probably need a bit touch up in Photoshop.

voltaire_ira · April 26th, 2005

cramming time again!hehehehe!

onlyblood · April 26th, 2005

I think the car too big.

voltaire_ira · April 27th, 2005

here's my final wip after some PS work.
just don't stare on the ferrari too much..hehehehe

April 26th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
Martin Day Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Warsaw Age: 28 Posts: 43 Name: Marcin Dzieniszewski	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 Hi, In my opinion the first WIP has much more impact. I mean the light and reflections in wet ground. Don't turn back from that idea. Good luck Martin

April 26th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
jucaro Moderator Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Singapore Age: 32 Posts: 604 Name: Juan Carlos Rosalejos	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 Remove that testarossa. Its taking the attention away from the buildings and the streets. (cue: Enter Don Jonson) I thought your first wip was supposed to be a rush hour on a rainy late afternoon.

April 26th, 2005	#6 (permalink)
Da_RoCk Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Singapore Age: 26 Posts: 213 Name: Ramir Lorich Araneta	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 Ta, LOL, miami vice... btw, Try to check on the street lamp (left side). It has no lamp head... I agree with martin... the first WIP has more voltaire-ish feel into it. The last one seems to be on a bright sunny day but it seems your sky doesnt say so. Try to post-process it more. __________________ MD8 Design Solutions + X3MFXSTUDIOS

April 26th, 2005	#7 (permalink)
Richard McCarthy Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 757 Name: Richard McCarthy	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 Hey John! I think you need to tone down that light bloom effect too. It makes the whole scene lacking in contrast and pretty unrealistic. And I agree with others, the car in foreground is the focus of the image, it sort of makes it a "car showcase render" than a "Urban viz", you probably need to remove it, or put it towards the back of the image. Also the RPC people seems to be quite out of place (constrast issue again) with the rest of the scene, probably need a bit touch up in Photoshop. __________________ Don't mess with my hat !!

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voltaire_ira Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: SeyBoooooooooo Age: 29 Posts: 431 Name: John Voltaire Garcia	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 cramming time again!hehehehe! __________________ QUICKRENDER VISUALIZATION STUDIO quickrender@smartbro.net

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onlyblood Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: sh Age: 31 Posts: 80 Name: wang weihua	Re: John Voltaire M. Garcia - WIP 2 I think the car too big.

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