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Old April 26th, 2005   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone,

Here's my WIP at last. I just started and still have lot's of things to do.
I hope I can still make ut to the deadline..sheesh, been a very busy month!
anyways, same during the college archi years...sleepless nights and coffee plus cramming!

...inspired while i was walking along Ortigas avenue here in the Philippines.
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here's an update...have to work fast...
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Hi,

In my opinion the first WIP has much more impact. I mean the light and reflections in wet ground.
Don't turn back from that idea.

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here's my almost final wip...
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Remove that testarossa. Its taking the attention away from the buildings and the streets. (cue: Enter Don Jonson)

I thought your first wip was supposed to be a rush hour on a rainy late afternoon.
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Ta,

LOL, miami vice... btw, Try to check on the street lamp (left side). It has no lamp head... I agree with martin... the first WIP has more voltaire-ish feel into it. The last one seems to be on a bright sunny day but it seems your sky doesnt say so. Try to post-process it more.
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Hey John!
I think you need to tone down that light bloom effect too.
It makes the whole scene lacking in contrast and pretty unrealistic.
And I agree with others, the car in foreground is the focus of the image, it sort of makes it a "car showcase render" than a "Urban viz", you probably need to remove it, or put it towards the back of the image. Also the RPC people seems to be quite out of place (constrast issue again) with the rest of the scene, probably need a bit touch up in Photoshop.
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cramming time again!hehehehe!
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I think the car too big.
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here's my final wip after some PS work.
just don't stare on the ferrari too much..hehehehe
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