Eyal Shmuel - wip3

zion3d · May 15th, 2005

Hi everybody,

Well here is my work in progress, im not finished modeling yet but the main idea
is to give the right side the welcoming and entrance to the upper levels function(lobby stairs and lifts), the center will be the connecting bridge between the two sides(functions) and the left side will get the working function(offices).

c&c are welcome.

Thanks and good luck everybody!!!

Tim Nelson · May 15th, 2005

Looks good so far. I think there's a little too much foreground in the composition - unless you plan on adding something else there. But if it's just the same flooring I think you can crop a lot of the bottom.

zion3d · May 15th, 2005

Thanks Tim, you are right!
this camera position is not final and i will change it with the process of the work.
im still in the design process so things may change but anyhow... thank you!

zion3d · May 22nd, 2005

hi everybody,

well here is the second scene i'm working on.still in autocad so i haven't
put any materials yet or used any kind of light... to be continued.

good luck!!!

Continuumx · May 23rd, 2005

Quote:

Originally Posted by zion3d

hi everybody,

well here is the second scene i'm working on.still in autocad so i haven't
put any materials yet or used any kind of light... to be continued.

good luck!!!

I like the structural definition of the truss work!

May 15th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Tim Nelson Veteran Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Providence, RI Age: 30 Posts: 1,612 Name: Tim Nelson	Re: Eyal Shmuel - wip3 Looks good so far. I think there's a little too much foreground in the composition - unless you plan on adding something else there. But if it's just the same flooring I think you can crop a lot of the bottom. __________________ Tim Nelson timnelson3d.com

May 15th, 2005	#3 (permalink)
zion3d Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: The Netherlands Age: 37 Posts: 42 Name: Eyal Shmuel	Re: Eyal Shmuel - wip3 Thanks Tim, you are right! this camera position is not final and i will change it with the process of the work. im still in the design process so things may change but anyhow... thank you!

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