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Branko Jovanovic - WIP - basic structure
Sorry for posting so late, guess that time chase us all...
Anyway, here is my WIP, just basic structure and light study... I plan to expand vertical dimension of the frame, show more of the water and terrain/stones naturaly... My first idea was to give structure a very rough concrete dirty texture, but I am not sure yet... Hope to achieve soft humid atmosphere in my image... Good luck everyone! |
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Re: Branko Jovanovic - WIP - basic structure
nice atmosphere you got there sir. i would also love to see the kind of atmosphere you're after. keep it coming...
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Re: Branko Jovanovic - WIP - basic structure
yeah nice mood to the dome so far.....interesting conept..keep it coming
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Re: Branko Jovanovic - WIP - basic structure
Looking good so far Branko, a lot of opportunity with the scale of the interior and all the glazing of envelope. Keep it up buddy!
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Branko Jovanovic - WIP 2&3
Not much time left for philosophy... These are two possible angles. Light will be more or less like this, perhaps some volume light effects will be added.
Nexst step - refining the terrain, adding textures to structure and to terrain and plants in the end. I would love to hear some comments and advices on this: 1. Camera angle - first or second 2. Textures - my idea is to give it rough concrete, with dirt, humid, aged and weathered, a bit Piranesian mood, like Louis Khan and Le Corbusier nature concrete style, but after decades in jungle... Other version is white "Richard Meier" look, shiny plaster and glossy white metal... What do you guys think? |
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Re: Branko Jovanovic - WIP 2&3
That's great stuff. I like camera 2, and the weather texture idea sounds promising. Only parts I don't like are the patterning on the rocks and the way a few of the parts seem extremely polygonal.
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Re: Branko Jovanovic - WIP 2&3
I agree the second POV is stronger, nice work. To me the compression ring around the center cylinders holding the curved ribs together looks kind of scrawney, maybe that is how it is designed and you are held by that, but increasing it to twice the thickness would look better in my humble opinion. Again this is just an opinion so disgard it as you will, but I think if everything was aged an worn out it would appear heavy while if you have the landscape all rustic and the structure new with the appropriate materials, it would seem light and majestic in contrast to landscaping and foilage inside. Once again just on opinion, you do such nice work I am sure you will come up with a great solution.
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