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Good luck everyone!

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Tim Woods

Modelling: Could do with some more detail. Focusing on elements that will be more visable, like the tops of the small domes. they look a bit weird at the moment.

Lighting: The internal light works well, but the external light seems a little over powering.

Composition: Strange angle to pick.

Overall the image could do with loosing the all over bloom effect. It really doesnt add anything. The angle you have chosen for the image doesnt really do anyhting for me. You also have a very strong colour range in there. from bright blues and reds etc. Its a little over powering.

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Alex Morris

The building envelope needs more detail and the exterior lighting needs fixing to make it consistent with the background image. The ground textures need more depth and contrast to stop the people appearing to float.

The fog in the background could do with more work - perhaps a Z-depth pass would help?

Neoscape Critic

M/T: The foreground is confusing and flat. The sky and water combination is a bit disapointing as well.
L: The lighting is not convincing
Comp: It is heavy on the right side and not balanced. The camera is distorted so there isn't a clear focus.
C/O: The image does not have anything that is unexpected
U: The image has an overall look.
B: The walkways on the outside of the dome are nice

ikinman

The modeling could use a bit more detail and work in the dome. Some nice lighting and color in the dome, but the wide camera angle doesn’t do too much for the image and focuses too much attention on the front entrance, which is suffering from some lack in detail. The depth of field needs work, especially in the back. Some interesting work in the interior, but the overall composition suffers from the camera, and the flatness of the foreground and background.