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| Challenge #2 - FINAL (Individual) If you are one of the top 15 contestants, please post your Final images here. |
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Re: Dengjian-Final
Modelling: Landscape elements look great, the dome looks good, although some extra detail wouldnt go amiss. The bridge to the right looks a bit rough, and the textures are not too good, maybe some more work needed in this area.
Lighting: Overall a good effect, but it looks a little bit bland. Maybe some extra light from inside the dome to pull the focus to the centre. Composition: Love the camera angle, and the shot framing is excellent. This unique perspective really brings the building to life, reminds me of Jurassic Park. It also emphasises the scale of the project and the nature element. Impressive! Overall a strong image, let down a little by the poor bridge foreground. The rest is great though. Some extra light in the dome would have helped lift the central focus. The intergration with nature in this image is perfect.
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Re: Dengjian-Final
Just checked my monitor again - looks like patches of yellow are in this year! Nice level of detail and a dynamic composition but needs a bit of fine tuning. Right now my eye is drawn straight to the waterfall and not the building - I think maybe some interior lights might draw the focus back to the building.
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Re: Dengjian-Final
M/T: The modeling and texturing is nicely done but the trees seem copied.
L: Good overall lighting feel Comp: Great! Best use of the bridge and birds. Clearly you thought about the composition. C/O: Creative and original. U: Perfectly unified. B: Nailed it. |
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Re: Dengjian-Final
One of the strongest images. Excellent work across the board, and one of the few examples of camera tilt in a composition that actually works well. The angle makes the image feel kinetic and inviting. Two issues that have been mentioned – the trees on the left are rubber stamped a bit too much, and the bridge on the right needs some work – more detail on it would really make this image sing. Terrific work.
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