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Old April 29th, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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hello!

I am going tomorrow to Prague so already today I send first small pictures.
I have a problem. 100 ideas per hour causes that I do not know which to choose. I do not know on which picture to decide. I'm still looking for perfect shot. Suggestions and the critique welcome.
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Old April 29th, 2007   #2 (permalink)
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Despite the brilliant use of cartoon characters in the fifth image, I would have to say view 4 is my favorite.
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Hi!

I would go for the fourth one also.

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wow, things are coming in fast for you lukasz! i can also go with view 4 but with a little less framing from the foreground. can't wait to see more. keep it up!
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I like the 2nd one although I think you could pull back a bit and see a bit more of the foreground and not crop the building with the stair structure.

The 4th for me looks a bit fixed, a bit stayed.... the 2nd is more dynamic.


Are you going to keep the cartoon characters I think they are great...

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Wow! You are moving very fast. I would go with the fourth one if you can center the main model...move the frame a bit to left so that there is some less of foreground on the left hand side and the building is at the center of the image.

Great start...can't wait to see more!
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Stong ability to control scene! Camera and composition of the picture have original ideas. I like the fourth and the fifth images very much.
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Hi Lucasz,

I also like the view number four. Try moving the camera up a little bit more and change the frame from landscape to portrait. I am looking forward to the next update.

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The 4 is quite good, if the 2 have already change and move and would be better slightly.5 cartoon characters are very happy
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The 2nd and 4th angles are very good. 4tBut the h one is better to explain and ayour story .vail surroundings
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