Fan Wu-WIP

cg.fan · April 30th, 2007

just some simple images.

ipdesigner · April 30th, 2007

I would suggest you zoom in a little your camera, it doesn't focus anymore on the structure. Nice image though especially the second.

Good Luck.

CHE · April 30th, 2007

Hi Fan,

That is a good start. I think that the idea of having the building next to water would give you a bit more to play around for your composition.

Ernesto

miaomiao lin · April 30th, 2007

Hi fan
A quite good beginning, need to consider the composition of the appearance, good luck

aaron-cds · May 1st, 2007

I think the last view starts to present the idea of discovery and arrival. The first view just makes it look like there's still a long way to hike. The middle view doesn't go with your story, IMHO.

exquisitus3d1 · May 7th, 2007

The last view and atmosphere might be appropriate.
I am looking forward to see more images.
May you lucky!

liuxianfang · May 9th, 2007

I prefer the second one, it's full of imagination, and it 's hard to imagine how will you deal with the functional envirenment,or this building will lost its activity. Waiting for more!

wodewil · May 9th, 2007

Hi

Meseems that the first picture the most shows the *fortified character of the building (*story). And gives the possibility of using of the idea with the cloudy castle mountain.
There now second picture gives the largest possibilities in order to show your skill.

See You

mattmax · May 11th, 2007

the first image has the possibility of telling more about the surroundings and the journey which may take in order to reach up into high altitude.

also maybe the grand arch side could face the camera (just suggestion)

looking forward for the next one

escargot · May 11th, 2007

Hi there, you seem to get a good start. I agree with those who prefer the 1st or the 3rd over the 2nd one. I think that a adjusting your camera vertically between the angles in th 1st and the 3rd would result a nice POV. The 1st is too 'fortified' and the building isn't important enough in this view. The 3rd is better in this sense, but it's too conventional at the same time. Keep up the goog work!

l'escargot

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ipdesigner Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: al ain-jebel ali-dubai Posts: 737 Name: Sherwin Boston	Re: Fan Wu-WIP I would suggest you zoom in a little your camera, it doesn't focus anymore on the structure. Nice image though especially the second. Good Luck. __________________ my blog

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CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 807 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Fan Wu-WIP Hi Fan, That is a good start. I think that the idea of having the building next to water would give you a bit more to play around for your composition. Ernesto

April 30th, 2007	#4 (permalink)
miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Fan Wu-WIP Hi fan A quite good beginning, need to consider the composition of the appearance, good luck

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aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 694 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: Fan Wu-WIP I think the last view starts to present the idea of discovery and arrival. The first view just makes it look like there's still a long way to hike. The middle view doesn't go with your story, IMHO. __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

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exquisitus3d1 Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: gui yang Age: 36 Posts: 61 Name: xiaoge liu	Re: Fan Wu-WIP The last view and atmosphere might be appropriate. I am looking forward to see more images. May you lucky! __________________ Understand me http://www.exquisitus3d.com./ contact me xiaogeliu@126.com

May 9th, 2007	#7 (permalink)
liuxianfang Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 160 Name: xianfang liu	Re: Fan Wu-WIP I prefer the second one, it's full of imagination, and it 's hard to imagine how will you deal with the functional envirenment,or this building will lost its activity. Waiting for more!

May 9th, 2007	#8 (permalink)
wodewil Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Wroclaw Posts: 229 Name: Lukasz Truchalski	Re: Fan Wu-WIP Hi Meseems that the first picture the most shows the fortified character of the building (story). And gives the possibility of using of the idea with the cloudy castle mountain. There now second picture gives the largest possibilities in order to show your skill. See You

May 11th, 2007	#9 (permalink)
mattmax Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: perth Posts: 48 Name: matthew supranata	Re: Fan Wu-WIP the first image has the possibility of telling more about the surroundings and the journey which may take in order to reach up into high altitude. also maybe the grand arch side could face the camera (just suggestion) looking forward for the next one

May 11th, 2007	#10 (permalink)
escargot Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Budapest Age: 29 Posts: 77 Name: Andras Miklos Balogh	Re: Fan Wu-WIP Hi there, you seem to get a good start. I agree with those who prefer the 1st or the 3rd over the 2nd one. I think that a adjusting your camera vertically between the angles in th 1st and the 3rd would result a nice POV. The 1st is too 'fortified' and the building isn't important enough in this view. The 3rd is better in this sense, but it's too conventional at the same time. Keep up the goog work! l'escargot

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