Neha Kakkar - WIP

Neha · April 30th, 2007

Hi everyone! It is a great honor to participate amongst such amazing talents. I hope to learn a lot during the course of competition, so your valuable critics & comments are always welcome

Here is the first image, trying to fix up the camera angle. For the final shot, I'll probably take the camera behind to show the mughal garden infront which I am yet to start model.

BR1AN · April 30th, 2007

Nice start, the garden sounds very interesting. It should be fun seeing how different each of the images are with the same base model. I like your story, look forward to seeing your progress.

aaron-cds · April 30th, 2007

Nice and bold. I like it. One thing that stands out are the area shadows. They look too blurry for the sun angle.

Neha · April 30th, 2007

Thanks Brian!

Aaron, you are right about the shadow...I always tend to make them over diffused

CHE · April 30th, 2007

Hi Neha,

I really like the way the sun is casting shadows in the geometry. I see how you could use them to organize your composition. One think that I notice is that your camera is tilting up a little bit so your vertical lines aren't straight right now. Try moving the camera target at the same height as the camera or use a camera correction modifier. I am looking forward to see how this wip develops.

Ernesto

miaomiao lin · April 30th, 2007

Hi Neha,
The pretty flower park, quite good viewpoint, expectation progress

enigma · April 30th, 2007

great start neha...i am beginning to wonder what the garden along with the structure would look like. keep it up!

xrowdac · April 30th, 2007

hi' Neha.

. the view and angle is really good.. and great choice..
Im sure it would be even nicer later on..

aLL the best..

Neha · April 30th, 2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by CHE

One think that I notice is that your camera is tilting up a little bit so your vertical lines aren't straight right now. Try moving the camera target at the same height as the camera or use a camera correction modifier.

Hi Earnesto, actually I have used negative vertical shift in the camera intentionally to give it a 3-point perspective view. My story demands the palace to look grand & majestic...so I've distorted the camera very slightly to create a more dramatic POV.

Fairlane62 · April 30th, 2007

Great modeling...Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

April 30th, 2007	#2 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Nice start, the garden sounds very interesting. It should be fun seeing how different each of the images are with the same base model. I like your story, look forward to seeing your progress.

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aaron-cds Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Arlington Heights, IL Age: 34 Posts: 694 Name: Aaron Coon	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Nice and bold. I like it. One thing that stands out are the area shadows. They look too blurry for the sun angle. __________________ Aaron Coon, Conceptual Design Studio

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Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Thanks Brian! Aaron, you are right about the shadow...I always tend to make them over diffused __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

April 30th, 2007	#5 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 807 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Hi Neha, I really like the way the sun is casting shadows in the geometry. I see how you could use them to organize your composition. One think that I notice is that your camera is tilting up a little bit so your vertical lines aren't straight right now. Try moving the camera target at the same height as the camera or use a camera correction modifier. I am looking forward to see how this wip develops. Ernesto

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miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Hi Neha, The pretty flower park, quite good viewpoint, expectation progress

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enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 28 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP great start neha...i am beginning to wonder what the garden along with the structure would look like. keep it up! __________________ WIP...

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xrowdac Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Bern,Switzerland Posts: 10 Name: Harold Francisco	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP hi' Neha.. the view and angle is really good.. and great choice.. Im sure it would be even nicer later on.. aLL the best..

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Fairlane62 Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 30 Name: Joel Hernandez	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Great modeling...Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

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