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May 4th, 2007
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Name: feng wang   |
Ziye -WIP
The lighting effect is going to be dusk.And a lot trees/bushes/shrubs will be added around this villa and along the edge of water. The scene will arouse a kind of quiet feeling when people look at this view.
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May 6th, 2007
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Re: Ziye -WIP
The calm feeling you want your image to evoke is already begining to shape up through the lighting and all the water. Offcourse this is just the start, later you'll have to develop structure around the building. All the entourage will add a lot of life to the image. Look forward for the updates...
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May 6th, 2007
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Re: Ziye -WIP
Hi Feng,
Nice start. The reflections in the water are really eye catching. A layer of fog on top of the water surface would definitively give depth to your composition. Also, have you tried other sun angles? The front facade is almost completely in the shadows. Some more contrast in the lighting could help to highlight the beautiful details of the house. Ernesto |
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May 9th, 2007
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Name: Lukasz Truchalski  |
Re: Ziye -WIP
Hi
The very soft scene. I imagine her with the pink faint light, with the strong bloom effect and with the fuzzy background. One can obtain the effect of the paradisiacal dream. Your interpretation affects imaginations! See You |
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May 10th, 2007
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Name: Zoltan Kovacs  |
Re: Ziye -WIP
Hey, you chose a rather conservative view what immediately makes your picture feel quiet and tranquil, but later you might have difficulties to develop it to something extraordinary. Still it's a very nice start. Take care about tranquil water and other things like that though: naturally beautiful things easily become kitschy... Good luck!
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May 10th, 2007
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Re: Ziye -WIP
There is alot of potential in this, but you need to fix the composision. At the moment the building is smack bang in the middle. The weakest spot. move the building to the upper left third of the picture for a stronger composition.
The angle of the sun also needs to flip to the other side. If these are done it will make to building appear to be looking towards the sun. Thus be more possitive. JHV |
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