aaron-cds

The plants and lighting are nearly final. Texturing will be next.

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Koper

Are you the only contestant using the 3das model??

ok, its coming along very fast! it's gooood
maybe re-think the shocking pink flower pots (or just the color) its a bit...

oh, i love the swiming pool! i can smell the chlorine, it makes me wanne take a dip

TheAllusionist

Nice work so far Aaron, I could see perhaps some ground uplights or something to show a bit more of all the landscaping you have close to the viewer, I know it's there, but I can barely see any of it. Just my two cents, great work as usual

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aaron-cds

no, here's the other entry - http://www.cgarchitect.com/vb/23570-ziye-wip.html

as far as the pots go, I'll be replacing the evermotion pots with clay pots. I'm also not committed to the pink flowers.

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aaron-cds

Thank you Russell. I might add some landscape lighting once I finish the texturing.

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Chad Warner

It's quite nice! I don't like the plantings you have below the terrace level though.

wodewil

Ello Aaron

I love Yours ivy! I'm going to ivying my model too
Nice climate.

gfa2

I really like the mood you have here Aaron and the fact that you have lights on inside makes me want to look in and see what's going on in there. When I do I see something weird. It's like it's an image was used for the interior but the perspective is off.

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Ernest Burden

Its coming along rather nicely! However, watch the line formed by the rooflines descending left-to-right being picked up by the trees and arbor. Try reversing the heights of the three trees to counter the plunge.

The lighting is nice for establishing the feeling (I should read your story before commenting, but haven't yet) but it lacks a focus. The story will say where that focus should be. Having it all at accurate but un-distinguished levels is passive. When you tell a story you focus on some things at the expense of others. Your lighting is part of how you're telling your story.

Think: active/passive, major/minor

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pedros3d

Hi there Aaron, if you´re planing 2 use that background image, i think it will help some direct lighting from right side, to match background light direction, good luck,great work!!